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Jan 05, 2011 17:57

[VOICE] [NOT ACTION I AM A LOSER SOMETIMES]

[For the record, Nina's voice here is younger sounding than most people who've met her will recognize because as opposed to her adult twenty-something year old form, she's in a teenage sixteen-ish year old form. The voice is still recognizable, just less matured]So, this is where new people arrive, is ( Read more... )

who said i'm insane?, throw in a rondis and it's a party, meet the neighbors, @jack horner, @waltz, stream of consciousness, story time with ms. parker, infertani is a loser, #teenage, @leonard mccoy, being a bitch as usual, @raven

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[Voice] crisis_rain January 5 2011, 23:46:10 UTC

Sure, I'll finish yer little story for ya, The End. See? It's easy.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:06:59 UTC

Well, that's one way to do it, anyway. Efficient, too.

[Voice] crisis_rain January 6 2011, 00:10:51 UTC

I could make up the endin' if you'd prefer. Can't say I know how it ends properly, sounds kinda familiar if ya ask me.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:12:22 UTC

I can't say it matters that much to me either way, it just came to me. Must've been something I heard when I was younger... [A pause and then another swig of that drink before-]

Besides, a stalemate ending's pretty poetic.

[Voice] crisis_rain January 6 2011, 00:15:29 UTC

I don't get the feelin' that this particular story would ever end in a stalemate. Doesn't take a genius ta figure out that it's kinda similar to the circumstances here.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:18:18 UTC

You foresee a climax?

[Voice] crisis_rain January 6 2011, 00:23:03 UTC

Unfortunately, the way it looks seems to be more in the favour of that there Organization. Sometimes conflicts just can't be resolved by talkin'.

Besides, big dramatic war would make fer a much more interestin' read, wouldn't you agree?

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:27:30 UTC

Dunno, this one was striking me as a morality tale. Throwing in a big war might make it more exciting, but a few little kids might miss the point if that was the case.

[Voice] crisis_rain January 6 2011, 00:35:43 UTC

I don't think little kids would be readin' stories like this to begin with...

[Voice] compos_mentis January 7 2011, 01:55:44 UTC

And here I thought I had a revolutionary new bedtime story.

[Voice] crisis_rain January 7 2011, 02:50:52 UTC

This was yer idea of a bedtime story?!

[Voice] compos_mentis January 7 2011, 03:54:09 UTC

What, too lengthy?

[Voice] crisis_rain January 7 2011, 23:29:23 UTC

Bedtime stories are supposed ta help you sleep. Talkin' about death and demons isn't the best way ta go about it. Unless ya wanna give 'em nightmares.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 8 2011, 06:50:09 UTC

[A thoughtful little hum] Point. Guess I'm still not used to the dealing with kids thing.

[Voice] crisis_rain January 8 2011, 22:20:00 UTC

If ya give it a happy endin', then I'm sure the kids won't be traumatized!

[Voice] compos_mentis January 10 2011, 23:29:40 UTC

Heh. Well then... [How to make this end happily. She pauses a moment and then inhales before...]

In the end, the demons succeeded in destroying the Organization. All vestiges of their society were annihilated and whatever individuals left were set adrift with no cities or bases to return to in the sea of stars. The demons themselves, only finally realizing their losses in the aftermath of the conflict, found themselves contented to have eliminated the enemy which actually fought back and retreated back to their original holds, taking only materials from those cities and bases ( ... )

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