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Jan 05, 2011 17:57

[VOICE] [NOT ACTION I AM A LOSER SOMETIMES]

[For the record, Nina's voice here is younger sounding than most people who've met her will recognize because as opposed to her adult twenty-something year old form, she's in a teenage sixteen-ish year old form. The voice is still recognizable, just less matured]So, this is where new people arrive, is ( Read more... )

who said i'm insane?, throw in a rondis and it's a party, meet the neighbors, @jack horner, @waltz, stream of consciousness, story time with ms. parker, infertani is a loser, #teenage, @leonard mccoy, being a bitch as usual, @raven

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[Voice] apocalypsefall January 5 2011, 23:27:02 UTC

Finish the story? Let's see...

Suddenly a more competent ruler came to this organization. An intelligent and cunning ruler. With his help the Organization won and all the demons were vanquished as the ruler was remembered forever as a hero.

I suppose that's a decent ending.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:07:38 UTC

And what about those poor unwitting captives. Were they ignorant forever?

[Voice] apocalypsefall January 6 2011, 00:11:13 UTC

I guess a good story would mean they got their freedom hmm? It's not very realistic, though.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:13:58 UTC

Really? Can't say I've even been in such a situation before [she blatantly lied] so I wouldn't know what's "realistic" there.

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[Voice] crisis_rain January 5 2011, 23:46:10 UTC

Sure, I'll finish yer little story for ya, The End. See? It's easy.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:06:59 UTC

Well, that's one way to do it, anyway. Efficient, too.

[Voice] crisis_rain January 6 2011, 00:10:51 UTC

I could make up the endin' if you'd prefer. Can't say I know how it ends properly, sounds kinda familiar if ya ask me.

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:12:22 UTC

I can't say it matters that much to me either way, it just came to me. Must've been something I heard when I was younger... [A pause and then another swig of that drink before-]

Besides, a stalemate ending's pretty poetic.

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[ voice ] hippocraticly January 5 2011, 23:56:47 UTC

I think some of it's due for a revision before you even think about ending it.

[ voice ] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:05:36 UTC

Got any pointers for me, doc?

[ voice ] hippocraticly January 13 2011, 17:29:24 UTC

Re-phrasing the whole weakling bit might be a good start.

[ voice ] compos_mentis January 14 2011, 06:47:56 UTC

Mm.. Yeah, I can see your point. Seems a bit trite.

[Voice] originaljackass January 6 2011, 00:08:37 UTC

- and then Jack, that hero of real heroes showed up. After kicking ass and taking names, the day was saved. He got it all. Fame, fortune, and hot babes. The End.

1/2 compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:10:27 UTC

[There is a brief bit of a cold laugh here. She's honestly amused at that one]

[Voice] compos_mentis January 6 2011, 00:10:57 UTC

Jack, I presume.

[Voice] originaljackass January 6 2011, 00:12:12 UTC

The one and only.

[Accept no substitutes. Especially not the ones Luceti will attempt to throw at you.]

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