OMG OMG OMG. This was so wonderful! There is just too much in it that I adored.
I think you captured their quirkiness really well, their dance. I like it when he switches between moods quickly, from frustration to delight to tenderness to irritation.
“Oh you really want something.” Her fingernails scratched one ear, a weak spot that he hadn’t known he had until she had bitten it. I love writing that makes the reader's mind explode in mini scenes all on their own. Your writing totally does that for me.
“No. No-one is allowed to take you away from me.” He could feel the drums, echoing in his head, in full agreement with his dark promise. “No-one.”
She smiled, and the curve of her pink lips was too much for him to resist. He took her mouth like he had taken it thousands of times before, and would take thousands of times again. This was his dominion, none others. He kissed her the way she liked it, lush and full, with a bite of violence at the end.Like that. Rowr! You can feel the passion broiling under the surface with these
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Quite honestly, it is not hard to capture the Master and Lucy with heat - because they really are just that passionate for one another. God, the 'decimate' scene ... I thought they were just going to rip each other's clothes off. Mm. Decimate. Good word.
Can I just, I don't know, feed your Lucy/Saxon plot bunnies as many carrots as they so desire? Because you're feeding a need here with these absolutely gorgeous fics that I didn't even realise I had. These are so addicting! And I absolutely *love* your Master. And your Lucy. And they're just perfect together! And, and...
I did mention that these are my personal canon, right? (I'll stop gushing now ;))
delurking to say that i loved this fic, as i have loved the two previous, and that if you wanted to keep writing about these two for a good long time, i would probably try to send you cookies through my internet connection.
Heh. I do love me some cookies. Chocolate chip are the best for demented relationships between two such lovely and hot individuals, just saying. *ahem*
It's like a photo negative of Doctor/Rose fluff. They're absolutely adorable, for a couple of sociopathic megalomaniacs in love. I *really* love your Harry and Lucy, and if the show goes another direction, I'll go with your version, kthx.
You know, for all the relationships that RTD builds, he's hit on a good thing and I hope the fan response will be enough to make sure he doesn't screw anything up. He should have known we'd LOVE the Master and his 'Companion-wife'. I reaaaaaaaaally have to believe he's not going to screw that up. *eyes RTD from thousands of miles away*
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I think you captured their quirkiness really well, their dance. I like it when he switches between moods quickly, from frustration to delight to tenderness to irritation.
“Oh you really want something.” Her fingernails scratched one ear, a weak spot that he hadn’t known he had until she had bitten it.
I love writing that makes the reader's mind explode in mini scenes all on their own. Your writing totally does that for me.
“No. No-one is allowed to take you away from me.” He could feel the drums, echoing in his head, in full agreement with his dark promise. “No-one.”
She smiled, and the curve of her pink lips was too much for him to resist. He took her mouth like he had taken it thousands of times before, and would take thousands of times again. This was his dominion, none others. He kissed her the way she liked it, lush and full, with a bite of violence at the end.Like that. Rowr! You can feel the passion broiling under the surface with these ( ... )
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I did mention that these are my personal canon, right? (I'll stop gushing now ;))
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*points to the box for the carrots, as she keeps typing away at part 4*
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::sighs happily::
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