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Leverage, Nemesis!Eliot/Nate, get the goddamn key!neierathimaMay 15 2009, 12:45:34 UTC
((More Nemesis!Eliot. Follows immediately after this. All you need to know is that Eliot is the god Nemesis, Nate is his boyfriend, they are running around some catacombs in Rome looking for Pandora's box. And being chased by men with guns, naturally.
I'm experimenting with the dialog only thing. ))
"Uh oh."
"Nate? Nate! What the hell is going on in there? You're using your something went wrong voice, this is not a good time to be using that voice."
"I'm fine. Everything is fine."
"..."
"I dropped the key."
"You dropped. the. key. Like, you dropped the key at your feet and all you have to do is bend to pick it up?"
"Well, I wouldn't exactly characterize it that way."
"Nate, there are somewhere between six to a few dozen well armed men about to converge on our position, not to mention the fact that at any moment my presence here could tip off some people who don't need to bother with guns. Get the goddamn key."
"Eliot, darling, I'm handling it, but now might not be the time to panic
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Re: Leverage, Nemesis!Eliot/Nate, get the goddamn key!havenwardMay 15 2009, 14:08:45 UTC
Oooh, cool :D I don't always like just dialog, but for this I think it added something to the suspense of it, not knowing what they're doing and only what they're saying. I like it :D :D :D
Steve blinked a little as he approached Chris who was talking to another firefighter, one that Steve hadn’t seen before. He could only assume the man was the Jensen that Chris hadn’t shut up about since he started working at the firehouse on Chris’s shift about two weeks ago. Looking at him now, Steve understood why. Jensen was gorgeous. Not that his own lover wasn’t, but damn. And seeing them standing next to each other, both leaning back against the red truck, had Steve’s mind coming up with all sorts of dirty thoughts
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It felt so right. Jensen's face was between his palms, his thumbs traced over the slope of his nose, the sharp cheekbones, the freckles that he adored all the while Jensen's eyes were blown wide, vulnerable, and so fucking green
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I'm experimenting with the dialog only thing. ))
"Uh oh."
"Nate? Nate! What the hell is going on in there? You're using your something went wrong voice, this is not a good time to be using that voice."
"I'm fine. Everything is fine."
"..."
"I dropped the key."
"You dropped. the. key. Like, you dropped the key at your feet and all you have to do is bend to pick it up?"
"Well, I wouldn't exactly characterize it that way."
"Nate, there are somewhere between six to a few dozen well armed men about to converge on our position, not to mention the fact that at any moment my presence here could tip off some people who don't need to bother with guns. Get the goddamn key."
"Eliot, darling, I'm handling it, but now might not be the time to panic ( ... )
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