fic; the hurt amongst the joy

Sep 06, 2010 14:49

title; the hurt amongst the joy
rating; pg
word count; 1,680
characters/pairings; gwen, morgana, mentions of others
warnings/spoilers; angst, possible spoilers for s3
disclaimer; I do not own any of the characters, they are property of their respective owners
summary; Gwen's joy at Morgana's return to Camelot is wounded by her cold attitude.

a/n: I love ( Read more... )

tv: merlin, [fandom] fanfiction

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amaranthine_7 September 6 2010, 12:42:45 UTC
Oh... that's a really beautifully sad fic. You can feel Gwen's despair, hope and happiness mixed with hurt when Morgana is back and not the same as before.

allis

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commen_sense September 6 2010, 14:58:33 UTC
thanks for reading!

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commen_sense September 7 2010, 18:14:31 UTC
thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the characterizations, I was worried about them...

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fembuck September 6 2010, 18:15:13 UTC
God, that was beautiful and heartbreaking. Gwen's sadness at Morgana's absence and her joy at her return were so well presented. I wanted so much for their reunion to be warm and tender. Seeing Morgana be so cold to her was absolutely heartbreaking, but I know I must prepare myself for it. I think I'm going to be wanting to hug Gwen a lot in the near future.

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commen_sense September 7 2010, 18:17:50 UTC
thank you so much!!

I think I'm going to be wanting to hug Gwen a lot in the near future.

as much as I'm excited for evil!Morgana, I know that I'll be feeling similarly for Gwen throughout this season :(

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commen_sense September 7 2010, 18:18:15 UTC
thank you!

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paynesgrey September 7 2010, 20:39:53 UTC
Oh this was heartbreaking, poor Gwen! But this seems to be so perfect and true to the direction this next season will take.

the bracelet -- oh dear, that was telling, though I did enjoy Morgana getting defensive and cold toward Gwen about it, knowing she was thinking of Morgause.

Nice work, darlin!

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commen_sense September 8 2010, 14:51:33 UTC
thank you so much! <3

the only thing that sort of makes up for the loss of gwen/morgana is morgause/morgana. I have read really good things about them and their scenes in the first episode so I'm super excited to see their interactions just as much as I'm dreading the coldness of gwen/morgana :S

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