"4 times Raiya suspected Yuto having a Girlfriend + 1 Time Yuto told him the Truth"

Apr 21, 2011 16:41

Title: 4 times Raiya suspected Yuto having a Girlfriend + 1 Time Yuto told him the Truth
Author: columbin3 
Pairing: NONE!
Character: Nakajima Yuto and Nakajima Raiya
Rating: GP
Genre: Failed Crack.
Summary:
Raiya is a one heck of an over-protective younger brother that he couldn't imagine what will he do if his beloved Oniichan gets himself a girlfriend.

Things happening to him were too much for a 12 year old kid to handle -- to a 12 year old over-protective otouto. )

nakajima yuto, nakajima raiya, fanfiction

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matsujun19 April 21 2011, 08:44:41 UTC
HIKARU : MY PLACE!!!!!
ME : NO ITS MINE!!!

//push hikaru off the pc! LOL

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matsujun19 April 21 2011, 08:58:23 UTC
u really make me laugh!! hahahahhaa~
Maena-chan!!
i'll be missing to read you walkingstick fic after this!!! :p

looking forward to HIKARU's your upcoming fics~

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columbin3 April 22 2011, 04:49:06 UTC
hehe!!
I am happy I succeeded in making this a funny story!!

ahhh.. now that I thought of it, do you want to be my character for the HIka-fic?!
It's just pretty short but I haven't named the girl-OC yet..
what name would you want Chika-chan??

hehe!
thank you very much for reading!
(^_^)/

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matsujun19 April 22 2011, 08:12:30 UTC
/kyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
u doint know how happy i am when u offer me with this!!

*inhale**exhale*

HAHAHAHA...Chika Amakusa would be fine!

thanks a lot dear~!!!

p/s : and yup! i think u can write a crack fic, and the evident is this fic!!
many of your readers says it funny~!!

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usagi_goes_pyon April 21 2011, 08:53:00 UTC
Ahahah~ Awwwww
Raiya's so cute! XZD

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columbin3 April 22 2011, 04:49:59 UTC
hahah!
I hope we see a recent picture of Raiya somewhere ne!~

thank you very much for reading!
(^_^)/

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usagi_goes_pyon April 22 2011, 05:12:51 UTC
Yeaaah~ He must be cuter/handsomer! ;3

You're welcome! :D
(^o^)

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columbin3 April 22 2011, 05:20:30 UTC
hahah!
I think the same thing...~
waaahh!~

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columbin3 April 22 2011, 04:50:43 UTC
whoah!
I am glad you liked it!

thank you very much for reading!
(^_^)/

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macymacymacy April 21 2011, 09:32:55 UTC
cuteee!!!! Raiya so cuttteeeee!!! OMG!!!! /whacked.

i love this. mean yuto and nakajima-mama!! haha. thanks for sharing!

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columbin3 April 22 2011, 04:52:12 UTC
hehehe!
It's nice to imagine how cute Raiya can be ne!~

thank you very much for reading!
(^_^)/

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hara_89 April 21 2011, 09:56:47 UTC
Maena-chaaaaaaan..... >.<

GYAAAAAAAAAA~
*shot* *faints due too much cuteness* >.<
This is really cute and hilarious...

Raiya is such a sweetheart overprotective brother ne~~~
'You Tamu, I will really grill you later!' He schemed. <--- I can totally imagine this!!! >.< gahahahahaha...

I don't want to lose my brother to a girl who has a colored hair and loves hair irons!!!!' <--- Yes, Raiya!! I agree! Raiya, why u have to be this cuteeeee?!!! >.<

"WHEN WILL YOU MARRY HER???"

They both heard Raiya screamed from upstairs. Anger was hinted in his voice.

Yuto and his Mama laughed hard again.

"SOON RAIYA-CHAN, SOON!!!" Yuto replied back.

<--- this is my most most fave parts, since every part is my favourite...
Yuto is indeed will have trouble if he has a girlfriend later ne~~~

This is not stupid yo, Maena-chan...
It's superlutely cute!!!
Me loving this much much!!!!!

:DDDDDDDDDDDD

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columbin3 April 22 2011, 04:56:20 UTC
hahaha!!!
I am happy you liked it Hara-chan!
I was really skeptic as how to portray Raiya and his innocence and being over-protective...
Wouldn't it be difficult for Yuto to marry?! ahaha!!

thank you very much for reading!
(^_^)/

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