fic: our hearts from iron

[colourmayfade]

lost. summary: there you go, just a shooting exercise. richard, juliet (a little bit of implied richard/juliet). 1,526 words. rated: pg-13.

disclaimer: I do not own lost or these characters. As if you didn't know that...
a/n: written for joyyjpg and that_evening as part of the luau at lostsquee. prompt: Richard. It was also for tellshannon815 (prompt: the missing years), but since I

Comments

[bachlava]

This is such a wonderfully observed look into Juliet's adjustment to her strange (and rather horrible) new world. Your version of Richard is spot-on, and I can well imagine Juliet's reacting and adapting in these ways. Lovely work.

I also have more experience than everyone else," Richard adds quietly
Indeed. ;)

[colourmayfade]

Oh, I'm so glad you think I did Richard in character, because the man really is a mystery to me! Thank you so much!

[ozmissage]

Oh this is stunning. The interaction between Richard and Juliet feels so true and I love the connection that grows between them. And the ending with the bird just broke my heart. This is a perfect look at how Juliet became the woman we know. Wonderful work!

[colourmayfade]

Aw, thank you. I'm flattered. I'm happy you thought the dynamic between them was good, since we got so very little of it on the show I didn't know if it would work. But then again, they're both so kickass, why not be kickass together?

[rodlox]

I've never seen a fic with both of them in it - and that's a shame. you demonstrate here just how great they work.

bravo!

[colourmayfade]

Oh, I'm positive there are plenty (ok, a couple) of stories with Richard and Juliet out there. I'm sure that you'll find them if you're interested! It really is a shame that these two aren't given more to do with each other. Anyway, thank you!

[rodlox]

oh there's fics out there with both of them in it...but few of those have Juliet and Richard interacting to any great degree.
sorry for not being more clear.

welcome.

[siluria]

I really like the subtleness of this, and the way you imply so much more than what's actually 'said'. Lovely characterisation!

[colourmayfade]

Thank you very much!

[tellshannon815]

Great interaction between Richard and Juliet here!

[colourmayfade]

Thanks!