Somebody At Sunset Call My Name - (McFly) Judd/Jones - Standalone

Apr 21, 2009 20:43

Title: Somebody At Sunset Call My Name
Author: Me, coloured_dream
Part: 1/1 (standalone, 3,028 words)
Pairing: Judd/Jones
Genre: AU, Romance
Rating: 15 for suggestion.
Summery: Everyone has a story, a history, things they run and hide from, Danny’d learnt that overtime.
Disclaimer: All untrue, just a work of fiction.
A/N: Written for the prompt challenge at mcflyslash. ( Read more... )

mcfly rps, standalone, judd/jones, fanfiction

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Comments 14

mamia94 April 21 2009, 22:24:11 UTC
That's one of the best Judd-Jones I've read in awhile.
I love the laziness and warm tones and just.
love it :)

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colourful_words April 22 2009, 20:32:07 UTC
Really? That actually made me grin a lot so thank you.

Aw I’m really glad you loved it and that the tranquillity came through :)

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nabbyb April 21 2009, 22:52:20 UTC
oh wow.

That was lovely.
Sweet and caring and beautiful.

The moonlight bathes translucent light across uncovered skin

my god, you're so talented.

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colourful_words April 22 2009, 20:33:40 UTC
Aw thank you. I’m very pleased you liked it so much especially that line its one of my favourites as well.

*blushes*


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elisa88 April 22 2009, 02:29:14 UTC
Danny can feel it, feel them drawn away from the cluster of freckles there and back up to his face, sees the pink tint that appears on scruffy cheeks.
Don't really know how to explain it, but i loveeed that. It's just. Wow.

I really enjoyed reading this.. it has tons of colours and .. i dunno, i felt warm inside whilst reading it =]

my fave thing: Danny's van XD

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colourful_words April 22 2009, 20:34:21 UTC
I’m glad you enjoyed reading :D

Hehe I love those vans. There’s just something about them, timelessly beautiful. When I got the prompt I knew I had to incorporate it into the fic somehow :)

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lambofcurl101th April 22 2009, 02:43:12 UTC
I loved this! I loved this! I loved this!!
♥ the Juuuuuunes!!
Danny listening to the rain is so precious.
I'm glad he stopped for Harry.

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colourful_words April 22 2009, 20:35:52 UTC
Hehe I’m glad you loved it so much, it was fun to write. I like writing sensitive Danny.

Thanks for reading :D

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invincible_jess April 22 2009, 04:35:50 UTC
oh this was just amazing.
i like little disgruntled peices like this, how they're all.. not just straightforward, if you know what i mean.
it was amazing! really truely!

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colourful_words April 22 2009, 20:38:38 UTC
Oh thank you :)

I wasn’t sure if the separate parts made it seem disjointed, interrupted the flow of the story so I’m pleased they didn’t.

Thanks for reading <3

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