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colorfulkitten

Our First... 5

Mar 28, 2010 03:43

Our First Union…
Rated: M / NC-17 (for strong sexual situations)
Author’s Note: This occurs on the very next day following Ch. 4.
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Vanille awoke to the glaring rays of sun peeking through the blinds, an arm immediately moving to hide her eyes before rolling to face ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 28 2010, 13:45:20 UTC

Yes! An update :D
sexy smut <3
This series is has ended, I'll sure be missing your fic!!!!
Do continue to right more awesome Fanille in the future!!!

colorfulkitten March 29 2010, 00:14:39 UTC

Thanks :) I did what I could for the smut, lol.
No worries, I have full intentions to write a sequel to this that takes place after the game. Single chapter fillers that happen during the game are also in the air, just depends on my time and motivation. ;)

tigon_0 March 28 2010, 20:50:36 UTC

I'm impressed! For your first smut scene that was really good! It's been a true pleassure to read, and I can't wait to see what you cook up next for them! Hell I might make this into a mini-comic just for fun :P Weather I post it is up to quality.

colorfulkitten March 29 2010, 00:23:21 UTC

Thankies, it truely was a challenge to write, lol. XD Glad you enjoyed it though. ;) Indeed there shall be more adventures for them from me, in due time. I say go for it! Could always do a collab project. O -o

tigon_0 March 29 2010, 04:00:52 UTC

hmmm....that could be fun to do. But where to start on something like that >.>

colorfulkitten March 30 2010, 05:01:23 UTC

Lol, I'm not sure really, I've never done a collab myself. XD

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dannydanelly March 28 2010, 23:05:30 UTC

Haha yay for virgins!

I like the idea of Vanille topping Fang first for some reason.... good job.

colorfulkitten March 29 2010, 00:27:14 UTC

Lol, guh, them being virgins made it all the harder to write! XD

It just came off naturally that Vanille would top first, at least in this case, lol. Thank ya! :)

dannydanelly March 29 2010, 01:12:47 UTC

Haha.

Virgin girls together for the first time.... hot.

But yeah I had to go back and add more details to my own fic cause it's hard to write.

But you did a good job, congratulations...

colorfulkitten March 30 2010, 04:58:04 UTC

It's so much easier to visualize than to form it into words for me, lol. XD

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