Our First... 5

[colorfulkitten]

Our First Union…
Rated: M / NC-17 (for strong sexual situations)
Author’s Note:  This occurs on the very next day following Ch. 4.
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Vanille awoke to the glaring rays of sun peeking through the blinds, an arm immediately moving to hide her eyes before rolling to face

Comments

[dannydanelly]

Haha yay for virgins!

I like the idea of Vanille topping Fang first for some reason.... good job.

[colorfulkitten]

Lol, guh, them being virgins made it all the harder to write! XD

It just came off naturally that Vanille would top first, at least in this case, lol. Thank ya! :)

[dannydanelly]

Haha.

Virgin girls together for the first time.... hot.

But yeah I had to go back and add more details to my own fic cause it's hard to write.

But you did a good job, congratulations...

[colorfulkitten]

It's so much easier to visualize than to form it into words for me, lol. XD

[dannydanelly]

Yes well, it's much easier to visualize things than to act them out eh?

I am good in bed but goddamn trying to talk to women long enough to get them there!

I'm sure we'll both get good at this smut business, after all... straight women can write it.. why can't we?

[colorfulkitten]

Ya, that's usually the case, lol.

XD I'm sure that is lame, lol. I'm a good kisser(apparently), but I got nothin else to go off of beyond that, rofl! (That's probably why my smut not so hot! XD ) Ahah~ let me walk away now.

All in due time... ok NOW I'm walking away XD

[dannydanelly]

Aww haha.

I'm sure you'll find someone to give you a good thrashing soon enough!

And it's good that you're a good kisser!

But yeah that usually the way it goes because the universe is a cruel cruel place.

[colorfulkitten]

Hmm, I missed the e-mail note for this one. O-o SORRY! ><
Lolol, a good thrashing XD ah, that made me laugh for some reason, haha, who knows. XD
Oh I'm not complaining about that, lol, something I'm proud of. X3

[dannydanelly]

Well that's good! You are certainly a stronger woman than I!