Fic - "Claws"

Jun 03, 2010 13:05

Title: Claws
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Basil, Ratigan. The Great Mouse Detective.
Word Count: 2,358
Rating: R
Summary: "You do love to remind me of what I am. You want me to be a rat? Very well. I'll be a rat!"
Warnings: Violence, sexual assault, general desecration of beloved Disney characters.
Notes: Written for/linked to disney_kink. Most ( Read more... )

fanfiction, disney_kink, character: ratigan, the great mouse detective, character: basil

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krissielee June 3 2010, 18:59:57 UTC
God damn, I love you.

That was amazing. Ratigan was beautifully, wonderfully, deliciously evil. I'm sure Basil was perfect, too, but I think I'm in love with your Ratigan, so Basil can just go lick his wounds off in the corner until I get done fangirlling. ;)

Also, I'm totally watching the movie as I write this, so I'm feeling rather immersed in this universe right now.

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colonel_bastard June 3 2010, 19:59:43 UTC
Yes. *basks in the love*

I was really worried about writing this--- it's definitely the darkest thing I've seen in the comm, and I was hoping I wouldn't get too dark, because I am prone to do so. Basically I will be prowling the meme looking for all the nasty villain/hero prompts. Those are the best. Although something about this pairing in particular really clicked for me, and I kind of just want to write more about them. XD

EVERYONE SHOULD BE IN LOVE WITH RATIGAN. I hadn't seen the movie in years, and I watched it last night just before writing this--- holy shit that is one sexy rodent. I mean really. I'm so happy that I was able to do justice to his delicious evilness. ^_^

I'll bet you never look at the fight scene the same way again. I know I won't. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! And again, thanks for the comm! <333

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krissielee June 3 2010, 20:07:51 UTC
Well, the comm is still in its happy fluffy high, but I will gladly prompt more dark Basil/Ratigan for you if it gets us more like this!

Ahaha, I've destroyed my childhood most decidedly with this comm. Not like I mind, of course, but it's fun to realise that I'll never be able to watch a Disney film without imagining the main characters screwing. :D

I'm just glad others are enjoying it, too! Thanks for writing this! I'm pretty sure I'll be pimping t his out on my lj as its own awesomeness because holy shit, this was one of the best dark things I've read in a while.

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colonel_bastard June 3 2010, 20:28:29 UTC
YES MORE DARK BASIL/RATIGAN PROMPTS PLZ. You know I will fill them to satisfaction (oohoohoo~).

Awww, yay! I'm so happy! I had so much fun writing this and I'm just thrilled to hear that it stands alone on "its own awesomeness." :D

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anneka_neko June 3 2010, 20:14:08 UTC
<3 OH MY GOD ILU SO MUCH FUCK THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. FUCK. FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK.

WORDS CANNOT EVEN. So yummy and dirty, and horrible and brilliant, and GAH and GUH and UNF and OTHER SEX NOISES!

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colonel_bastard June 3 2010, 20:36:08 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAA. <333

I'm so relieved and happy! You prompted this and I was only hoping I could live up to your expectations. Judging by your incoherent flailing, I would say my work here is done. XD

...except not. Now you've got me obsessed with this pairing and all their yummy dirty brilliance. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE.

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anneka_neko June 3 2010, 20:43:56 UTC
Ffffft THEN GO WRITE SOME MORE! <3 I'D LOVE YOU FOREVER.

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colonel_bastard June 3 2010, 21:33:13 UTC
Well krissielee just requested more of this in the meme, so stay tuned...

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eve_n_furter June 3 2010, 20:22:01 UTC
"With that, he raises a hand and unsheathes the claws that Basil never knew he had." Ka-chinggg! (I can see all of this very vividly in old style drawn animation. Wonderfully written!)
Some nice screencaps to go with it: http://miseenscene101.blogspot.com/2008/10/basil-of-baker-st.html and some wonderful original artwork: http://onanimation.com/?p=263

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colonel_bastard June 3 2010, 20:33:10 UTC
Yeah, when the claws come out, that's how you know it's getting serious. XD

Ohhhh, those screencaps are awesome. They've got my absolute favorite moment in there--- when Ratigan rips his claws down Basil's back, and Basil arches back and screams--- you just don't see shit like that in Disney movies anymore, and that's a damn shame.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! <3

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eve_n_furter June 3 2010, 21:55:13 UTC
Disney needs more claw! Yeah! *hums "cause I'm the oogie boogie man"*
<3

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cheriestar June 3 2010, 21:08:19 UTC
*claps* Bravo! A wonderful piece. And I a little dark. Not complaining about that, mind you;)

Heh, have to love those hero/villain pairings. My personal fave villain/hero pairing is NOS-4-A2/XR from Buzz Lightyear of Starcommand. However, this pairing is awesome too.

So once again, wonderful piece. Hope to see more from you

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colonel_bastard June 3 2010, 21:14:23 UTC
Whoaaaa, Buzz Lightyear of Star Command--- I haven't thought about that in years. I just had a total flashback! I was so into the movie, shipped Buzz/Warp, the whole nine yards. You have excellent taste. XD

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And I definitely hope to write more for this comm. ^_^

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colonel_bastard June 4 2010, 04:21:54 UTC
Awww, yay, thanks so much! I'm really happy, too! <3

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