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fearfulwarrior May 2 2009, 14:11:43 UTC
Wow, this is really good. I just found it (lol, distraction from homework), and I read all the chapters. I can't wait so see what happens next. :)

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collidingwithme May 2 2009, 16:26:07 UTC
Hello! :) It's always nice to know someone new is joining along. lol, I guess your userpic says it all about the distraction-from-homework part. I'm excited to get to the next chapter too! (lol, I always am. :P) Thank you!

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lilyflower120 May 2 2009, 14:46:19 UTC
Oh wow! What an exciting chapter! Poor Zaelem...I certainly hope that his character isn't killed off! And that wasn't mean of Evelyn per say but more of a dose of reality. Amazing chapter, as usual Ning! I especially like the effect of the black and white at the end. ;] Keep it up!

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collidingwithme May 2 2009, 16:31:26 UTC
Thank you! :D I was having a hard time deciding where to end the chapter as well as what to do with the last picture. :P

Evelynn's much more practical than Kismette, but Kismette doesn't see it. As for Zaelem... I really really wanna tell you what's next but I know I shouldn't! Argh, it's like an itch which I want to scratch so badly!

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simsinthecity May 2 2009, 16:44:02 UTC
Aw, they met again! I must say, that was awfully nice of Zaelem to do that :)

I hope he'll be okay ...

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collidingwithme May 3 2009, 16:34:24 UTC
Yea, and to think that Evelynn was so scared of him, lol!

Well, people always say that death is only the beginning, don't they? Okie, I'm just kidding! :P

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blueskydaze May 2 2009, 16:57:02 UTC
Lovely pictures, lovely story! I'm adding you so I can keep up with it. :)

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collidingwithme May 3 2009, 16:35:59 UTC
Thank you! :D Hope you'll like it even more in future! ;)

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leapsbarnes May 2 2009, 18:23:15 UTC
Really, really?! Awww come on! A cliffhanger? You're so mean :( lol.

AWESOME chapter! I really really really like Zaelem. I kinda hope he and Kismette get together, because I think that would be cute. Also *psssst*whispers*is she going to use her healing kung fu to save him????*whispers*

Ah! I just, I'm too distracted and all over the place to leave you a comment you deserve, suffice it to say, awesome awesome awesome :D I've been checking for you to update. So don't make me wait too long for the next update :P lol

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collidingwithme May 3 2009, 16:44:58 UTC
lol! :P

Thank you! I had a hard time deciding where to end this, actually. I thought it was getting a little too long, but ending before this is kinda no-kick, haha. *psssst*whispers*You think Mejaine's gonna let that happen? Well, I don't know about that healing-kung-fu part (*looks away innocently*) XD

I don't want to wait too long either! I'm so excited to get the next part out... Eek! I'm really weird!

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