also, you know, excellent chapter, like all the others. I like the little touches, like Kismette's slowly changing wardrobe as she becomes more mature and confident. The lovely writing about Zaelem and Jeremy.
Thank you! :D I didn't think most people would notice things like that, you know, so I'm really happy you would point it out. ^^ Yes, Kismette is growing up! *sigh* Jeremy. It's always a sad day when the old attends the funeral of a young one (figuratively, in this case).
*pats your back* Life still goes on, I'm afraid. ':|
Ooh, hope you had fun in school! :) (It was my first day of school, hehe, so it was awesome seeing my friends again. I met more of them today and we couldn't stop talking in class, lol!)
Okay, I got the miscarriage from the "very young life" comment, which meant that you had me strung along for a while on whether or not Zaelem was going to live or die.
Oh god, can I kill Charion now? Pleeeease? I know there's a line somewhere, but I've got a sword!
Seriously. Even if he didn't intend for Zaelem to accept the mission, what kind of moron attempts to ruin a former friend's life just because his relationship failed - mostly because of his own actions. Oh, yeah, and because he's a massive ass... people like him shouldn't have power and influence, they only abuse it.
And then to turn around and blame Kismette... sorry, but that's just par for the course. At least Mejane pushed herself as hard as everyone else, demanded perfection from herself and genuinely beat herself up over her inability to dance - you can still feel sorry for her. Charion, however, seems to think that nothing is ever his fault and he's always the victim and the exception to the rules. At least half the blame for the baby falls on his shoulders, not
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*sigh* I was so torn whether I should let the cat out of the bag. I wanted it more as something unexpected, yet I was afraid someone would find it offensive. :X (I didn't think of warning you guys about Zaelem's predicament, though, since it wasn't like something gory would be described or shown. :P)
Hahaha, I won't be held responsible for anything that happens to your monitor screen! :P You see, Chairon has always had his way, so this made him really really bitter about it. He just had to blame everyone else for it and.. the way everything happened (K started off the breakup by mentioning E's baby, comparing C with Z, getting together with Z after the truck accident) kinda supported C's twisted way of thinking about this whole thing. And made him even more blinded by his anger, since he could put the blame on someone else, the way he saw it. But.... at least he is super duper guilty about it now? He is finally accepting the fact that he created a huge mess and regrets it
( ... )
It's honorableness to the point of stupidity, which is probably Zaelem's tragic flaw right there. There's a word, but I think it's french. :)
But in his place, Chairon would have tried to weasel out of it, because that's what he does, I doubt he can even conceive of a plan having consequences more dire than someone's personal disgrace. And the absolutely horrible thing is that now that he's finally figured out that he's a life wrecker and that his actions have consequences that aren't all about him and are definitely more dire than he thought... now he might be able to be a real and responsible human being, if he even can be redeemed after sending Zaelem to his death
( ... )
YES! To the point of stupidity! It's like he doesn't know where to draw the line. But then again, should he? Or could he? Will he be able to live with himself knowing he could have saved millions and chose not to
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hahahahaha!! Oh shush, you do worse cliffhangers than me, Mela! You can't complain! :P
I thought we all expected that he was going to die? *whistles*
Chairon has always had his way and ... just really hates his life right now. And is trying to make it "right" again. :\ Evelynn, though, kind of swims into the whirlpool willingly, and even if you drag her out, she would still climb back into it the moment you let go.
Eee, don't make me blush! -^^- (Thanks, Mela! Can't believe I have to leave you guys again so fast, sigh.)
NO. NO. NO WAY WHAT NOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ZAELEM NOOO WHY ;___; OH MY GOD NO
AND EVELYNN TOO, OMG THIS IS SO SAD BUT IT WAS SO GOOD TOO CHAIRON YOU SUCK AND YOU'RE SO IMMATURE HE DIDN'T THINK ZAELEM WOULD ACCEPT THE MISSION? DO YOU NOT KNOW ZAELEM, CHAIRON. OMG.
Anyways, I wish you luck in school, and can't wait for more whenever you find the time! :)
(I burst out laughing when I saw your userpic, LOL!!!)
I can't say how happy I am at your outburst, hahaha! :P Too bad, though, that's just life. Zaelem made his choice to end his life, in a way.
Evelynn too. She digs her own grave, that girl. Even if you saved her, she will still jump back into her abyss. :X She'll probably never choose to leave Chairon, even if it costs her her life.
Chairon... thought it was a "duh" thing, I guess. Everyone was supposed to have this innate self-preservation in them, haha. Zaelem has a different value system, it seems. XD
Thank you! ^^ I will need all the luck I can get; it's my final year now, wee~!
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also, you know, excellent chapter, like all the others. I like the little touches, like Kismette's slowly changing wardrobe as she becomes more mature and confident. The lovely writing about Zaelem and Jeremy.
but still: noooooooo, zaeleeemmm~~
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Thank you! :D I didn't think most people would notice things like that, you know, so I'm really happy you would point it out. ^^ Yes, Kismette is growing up! *sigh* Jeremy. It's always a sad day when the old attends the funeral of a young one (figuratively, in this case).
*pats your back* Life still goes on, I'm afraid. ':|
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Aww, there there. ':)
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Oh god, can I kill Charion now? Pleeeease? I know there's a line somewhere, but I've got a sword!
Seriously. Even if he didn't intend for Zaelem to accept the mission, what kind of moron attempts to ruin a former friend's life just because his relationship failed - mostly because of his own actions. Oh, yeah, and because he's a massive ass... people like him shouldn't have power and influence, they only abuse it.
And then to turn around and blame Kismette... sorry, but that's just par for the course. At least Mejane pushed herself as hard as everyone else, demanded perfection from herself and genuinely beat herself up over her inability to dance - you can still feel sorry for her. Charion, however, seems to think that nothing is ever his fault and he's always the victim and the exception to the rules. At least half the blame for the baby falls on his shoulders, not ( ... )
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Hahaha, I won't be held responsible for anything that happens to your monitor screen! :P You see, Chairon has always had his way, so this made him really really bitter about it. He just had to blame everyone else for it and.. the way everything happened (K started off the breakup by mentioning E's baby, comparing C with Z, getting together with Z after the truck accident) kinda supported C's twisted way of thinking about this whole thing. And made him even more blinded by his anger, since he could put the blame on someone else, the way he saw it. But.... at least he is super duper guilty about it now? He is finally accepting the fact that he created a huge mess and regrets it ( ... )
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But in his place, Chairon would have tried to weasel out of it, because that's what he does, I doubt he can even conceive of a plan having consequences more dire than someone's personal disgrace. And the absolutely horrible thing is that now that he's finally figured out that he's a life wrecker and that his actions have consequences that aren't all about him and are definitely more dire than he thought... now he might be able to be a real and responsible human being, if he even can be redeemed after sending Zaelem to his death ( ... )
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Omg, I'm still heartbroken from the last chapter. I feel so bad for evelynn and I never realized how awful Chairon was.
I have no other words except to tell you how awesome I think your story is.
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I thought we all expected that he was going to die? *whistles*
Chairon has always had his way and ... just really hates his life right now. And is trying to make it "right" again. :\ Evelynn, though, kind of swims into the whirlpool willingly, and even if you drag her out, she would still climb back into it the moment you let go.
Eee, don't make me blush! -^^- (Thanks, Mela! Can't believe I have to leave you guys again so fast, sigh.)
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ZAELEM NOOO WHY ;___; OH MY GOD NO
AND EVELYNN TOO, OMG THIS IS SO SAD
BUT IT WAS SO GOOD TOO
CHAIRON YOU SUCK AND YOU'RE SO IMMATURE HE DIDN'T THINK ZAELEM WOULD ACCEPT THE MISSION? DO YOU NOT KNOW ZAELEM, CHAIRON. OMG.
Anyways, I wish you luck in school, and can't wait for more whenever you find the time! :)
BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO D':
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I can't say how happy I am at your outburst, hahaha! :P Too bad, though, that's just life. Zaelem made his choice to end his life, in a way.
Evelynn too. She digs her own grave, that girl. Even if you saved her, she will still jump back into her abyss. :X She'll probably never choose to leave Chairon, even if it costs her her life.
Chairon... thought it was a "duh" thing, I guess. Everyone was supposed to have this innate self-preservation in them, haha. Zaelem has a different value system, it seems. XD
Thank you! ^^ I will need all the luck I can get; it's my final year now, wee~!
(hahaha!) Bleah! :P
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