All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing [PG-13]

Feb 25, 2009 16:12

Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Author: hd_obsession
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: There is an OMC involved. AU
Word Count: 5411
Pairing: Jared/Jensen, Jensen/Danneel, Jared/OMC
Summary: Jensen, Jared’s best friend, is getting married, and Jared doesn’t think he’s ready for that. What is he willing to go through to make Jensen his?
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challenge fic, type: schmoop, au, type: humor, wc: 5000-10000, rating: pg-13

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ilovemybaby February 25 2009, 22:30:42 UTC
N'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!!!!!!
*squishes them both*

Such a CUTE WAY TO END, OMG!!! I was kinda thinking it'd end just like the movie did, I'm glad it didn't! I like this ending better! *g*

You did an amazing job, darling! You don't have any reason to be nervous, but you have all the reasons and more to be proud! Such an incredible work, OMG!!! Seriously, I loved this!!! *squishes you*

You are amazing, darling!

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ilovemybaby February 25 2009, 22:31:23 UTC
ZOMG I'M FIRST!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

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enablelove March 1 2009, 16:41:49 UTC
I wasn't a big fan of the movie's ending haha.

Thanks so much baby!

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brittwinchester February 25 2009, 22:35:43 UTC
EEEE YAY!!!

OMG I LOVE THE END. I never saw the movie but this is amazing! :D

You did a great job! I loved Jared trying to make Jensen jealous & Danneel was awesome.

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enablelove March 1 2009, 16:42:16 UTC
The movie is wonderful..but diff!

Hee thanks :D

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clubinthesky February 25 2009, 22:52:38 UTC
Oh man, this was so sweet the second time I read it. And has some funny lines in it, really awesome! ♥

aww omg Mark/Danneel... yes, plz *giddy*

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enablelove March 1 2009, 16:43:14 UTC
Awww thanks so much honey. For everything. YOU are my inspiration for so many of my fics bb <3 <3

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elless18 February 25 2009, 23:05:25 UTC
EEEEEEEE!!!!!!

That ending is 100 times better than the movie! I loved this so much!

I'm so proud of you! *smishes*

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enablelove March 1 2009, 16:44:34 UTC
\0/

thank you babe, that means a lot!

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nachekana February 25 2009, 23:58:56 UTC
OMG what's wrong with me!!??!! You wrote Danneel so perfectly that I'm actually almost sad that she and Jensen didn't end up together!!! And also, I wanted Mark to turn gay for Jared and I would have been sooo happy!!

I swear, it's the strangest thing ever because I'm completely anal with my OTP normally but just for this one time, I think it would have worked perfectly. Because you made Mark and Danneel so loveable. So yes, they're gonna end up together (and that's a statement, not a possibility :P) but still.

AHHH, you've confused me!!! LOL

That was my way of saying this fic was awesome and I loved it! =D

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enablelove March 1 2009, 16:45:04 UTC
hahah I'm glad you liked them as much as I did writing them!

Thank you <3 <3

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