End of Part One

[yoursweater]

I've been thinking about it the last couple of days, and at first, what I was going to do was continue to write and post the story here. However, after brainstorming and outlining the remainder of the chapters, I realized that there isn't really that much left for me to write

Comments

[sildil]

Oh wonderful! You really know how to write!

[yoursweater]

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!

[_alicesprings]

Fuck.
I am inarticulate like Justin at this point.

That whole last section, with the charges being read out, woah.
Of course I thought Brian was thinking of the charges against Gambino, then this;

One sexual offense of anal intercourse with a child. It can be said for me and every other authority figure in this room that we are disappointed that a man who is so well aware of the law would commit such gratuitous crimes.

So powerful. I can't wait for the rest, you've done a magnificent job, well done!

[yoursweater]

I appreciate the comments and feedback, seriously. Thank you!

[and_the_damned]

Just fucking brilliant!

You are amazing. I love the way you weave your stories and the dialogue, the entire fucking thing!!!!

[yoursweater]

Thank you!

[agneson9]

next

[yoursweater]

Soon.

[erraticonstilts]

this was so fantastic, and the end was just, and, you have rendered me incoherent. this is unique and original, and i enjoyed every minute of it. yay for you!

[yoursweater]

Hahah I'm glad I can render incoherancy, thanks!!