WHITE COLLAR KINK MEME ROUND 3
THE RULES HAVE CHANGED - Please read them.
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These rules Peter and El have given to Neal are really way too complicated for him to deal with at this point. They have him already thinking that this is just more messing with him, with his mind, something more to be afraid about.
I'd think they'd start with something simple, where he doesn't have a choice and he knows he can only succeed such as Neal must always sleep in the bed in his room. It's simple, there's not really much to think about and he could feel secure in following it. Once he becomes comfortable in the very simple rules, then he could build up to something like a choice, or thinking for himself.
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Thankyou for the suggestions, the thing was I had to set them up to fail, because it went back recapping from part six, wherein there was the line;
"As time went by Neal’s behaviour didn’t seem to change much, of course it was still early days but Peter had hoped there would be at least a modicum of difference after two weeks."
And now we're still filling in the gap of two weeks. Don't worry, after the rules fail, a good solution comes out of it. :)
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Thanks for writing! :)
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