I would Like: Well, Neal's almost always ends up on Burkes' doorstep, right? So I want drugged!Neal to turn on the Peter's doorstep, preferably at night, though not a must. Say, bad guys drugged him, somehow he escaped and his sluggish brain led him to the place he feels safe. Neal blurting out more open-hearted confessions. Peter tempted to ask Neal about some of his "alleged" crimes or personal details, but realizing it would be unfair. Teasing and banter after drug begins to wear out. El caring for Neal and being amused by whole thing. Neal even in his not-so-conscious state manages to see or do or "borrow" something that eventually leads to catching bad guys.
I Don't Want: Crack, heavy whump. For drug to be dangerous or cause severe pain (headaches are taken for granted:D) For confessions to be about treasure (or any mentions of treasure for that matter).
Rambling Man Pt. 1 (g)kriadydragonDecember 9 2011, 22:39:38 UTC
Peter finds Neal curled up on his front porch sleeping like an abandoned puppy sedated so it wouldn't follow anyone home. There is a rush of energy through Peter, like being drained and filled at the same time, a whirlpool of relief and confusion and anger that leave him frozen for a second that feels like several stretched out minutes
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Rambling Man Pt. 2 (g)kriadydragonDecember 9 2011, 22:35:46 UTC
"Yeah, you're right. It's not as funny as how I got those Russian Nesting Dolls out of the museum. They were huge but turns out all you need is a donkey and a couple of mail bags
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Re: Rambling Man Pt. 3 (g)kriadydragonDecember 9 2011, 22:36:31 UTC
Peter smiles, patting Neal on the arm. There is only one guy with a lisp and the means to kidnap someone with a tracker without getting caught: Eddie Valence, art thief with a side order of smuggling. Neal had figured out that the guy was going after a collection of large sapphires currently on display at a big time jewelers. But the FBI got to the jewels first, and with the cooperation of the jewelers made it look like someone had beat Eddie to the punch. Eddie must have assumed it was Neal. The guy was smart but was said to have a temper that made him stupid, because Neal's tracker should have screamed "can't steal anything
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Re: Rambling Man Pt. 3 (g)sholioDecember 10 2011, 00:45:28 UTC
This is really cute and sweet! :) I thought it was neat that Peter cut off Neal before his drugged rambling could get him into legal trouble. Drugged Neal is always adorable, and I am very amused that the Burkes seem to share this view. *g*
Re: Rambling Man Pt. 3 (g)imbecamielDecember 11 2011, 05:09:09 UTC
Awww... so cute. I love the trust, and all the different ways Peter takes care of and protects Neal here - physically, making sure he's alright, legally, not allowing him to incriminate himself while he's mentally incompetent, and then, of course, going out and getting the guys who did that to him. :D So sweet, all around.
Re: Rambling Man Pt. 3 (g)noiproksaDecember 11 2011, 15:37:33 UTC
How cute! I love drugged!Neal. The very first sentence already paints such a cute picture. Made me go all "awwww!" that Neal, although the world doesn't really make that much sense to him at the moment (or maybe because of that), goes to Peter. And I love Neal's drugged ramblings and how Peter stops him because he doesn't want to have to send him back to prison - Neal's right: Peter is such a good guy ;)
Re: Rambling Man Pt. 3 (g)ext_840786March 31 2012, 17:44:26 UTC
aww, funny and sweet and so totally Peter and Neal. I love how they catch him because he was "the jerk who stuck you with a needle and sounded like Sylvester the cat." and of course, Peter not letting Neal tell him anything is so sweet. I totally love the last line.
Characters: Neal, Peter, El
I would Like: Well, Neal's almost always ends up on Burkes' doorstep, right? So I want drugged!Neal to turn on the Peter's doorstep, preferably at night, though not a must. Say, bad guys drugged him, somehow he escaped and his sluggish brain led him to the place he feels safe. Neal blurting out more open-hearted confessions. Peter tempted to ask Neal about some of his "alleged" crimes or personal details, but realizing it would be unfair. Teasing and banter after drug begins to wear out. El caring for Neal and being amused by whole thing. Neal even in his not-so-conscious state manages to see or do or "borrow" something that eventually leads to catching bad guys.
I Don't Want: Crack, heavy whump. For drug to be dangerous or cause severe pain (headaches are taken for granted:D) For confessions to be about treasure (or any mentions of treasure for that matter).
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And yeah, he's totally adorkable:D
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