I would Like: Well, Neal's almost always ends up on Burkes' doorstep, right? So I want drugged!Neal to turn on the Peter's doorstep, preferably at night, though not a must. Say, bad guys drugged him, somehow he escaped and his sluggish brain led him to the place he feels safe. Neal blurting out more open-hearted confessions. Peter tempted to ask Neal about some of his "alleged" crimes or personal details, but realizing it would be unfair. Teasing and banter after drug begins to wear out. El caring for Neal and being amused by whole thing. Neal even in his not-so-conscious state manages to see or do or "borrow" something that eventually leads to catching bad guys.
I Don't Want: Crack, heavy whump. For drug to be dangerous or cause severe pain (headaches are taken for granted:D) For confessions to be about treasure (or any mentions of treasure for that matter).
Re: Rambling Man Pt. 3 (g)
anonymous
August 20 2012, 19:31:37 UTC
So, I'm apparently YEARS behind the wc fanfiction game, but I'm doing my best to make up for lost time... If you've seen a recent surge on hits on all your fics, that's me!
this one was absolutely sweet and lovely and generally "ooooooooh!". I really loved that you kept Neal in character when drugged-- ie, not maudlin, like I see so often, but childishly chirpy. It totally makes sense.
Characters: Neal, Peter, El
I would Like: Well, Neal's almost always ends up on Burkes' doorstep, right? So I want drugged!Neal to turn on the Peter's doorstep, preferably at night, though not a must. Say, bad guys drugged him, somehow he escaped and his sluggish brain led him to the place he feels safe. Neal blurting out more open-hearted confessions. Peter tempted to ask Neal about some of his "alleged" crimes or personal details, but realizing it would be unfair. Teasing and banter after drug begins to wear out. El caring for Neal and being amused by whole thing. Neal even in his not-so-conscious state manages to see or do or "borrow" something that eventually leads to catching bad guys.
I Don't Want: Crack, heavy whump. For drug to be dangerous or cause severe pain (headaches are taken for granted:D) For confessions to be about treasure (or any mentions of treasure for that matter).
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this one was absolutely sweet and lovely and generally "ooooooooh!". I really loved that you kept Neal in character when drugged-- ie, not maudlin, like I see so often, but childishly chirpy. It totally makes sense.
Thanks for sharing!
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