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fic: twilight - bred my misery and drowned it in him, part one (edward/jacob)

Dec 07, 2008 17:52

title. bred my misery and drowned it in him
fandom/pairing. twilight / edward/jacob
rating. pg13
parts. i, ii, iii
summary. Edward walked towards him again, his eyes focused on the boy falling apart in front of him. He didn't know why he cared, couldn't have put his finger on any one reason except that he knew the pain well -- knew the feeling of ( Read more... )

book: twilight: edward/jacob, book: twilight, (fanfiction)

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gymnastbritt December 8 2008, 06:23:55 UTC

*so* awesome.
haha.
i love how bella ditched them to become a real vampire - a bloodsucking, human eating vampire.
and then the angsty bit at the end made my day so awesome. haha. =]

boundary December 8 2008, 15:27:20 UTC

Thank you! :D

sativadivinorum December 8 2008, 18:18:58 UTC

"I kissed a wolf and I liked it!"

Hehe. The ending of this was ultra-cute and the way you wrote Edward's moping was very canon. Awesome job!!!

boundary December 9 2008, 02:56:59 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

twilightscribe December 9 2008, 04:30:39 UTC

*looks at the exploded mess that is her brain* Sorry... but you write some of the most PERFECT and beautiful Jakeward that there is, and it makes me feel a little... I suppose inferior, but that's in a good way. The way you write them... if I had my heart, I'd have said that you wrenched it a very good way. Too bad that it's still being repaired.

And at least I'm not the only one who has recognized how selfish Bella is; she really is a little b*tch, and this is precisely how I think she should have turned out. *though I had prayed for her imminent demise*Hey, it ALMOST happened!*

Well, anyways, I'm looking forward to more, so please! I can't wait for the next installments!

boundary December 9 2008, 16:09:51 UTC

Thank you so very much! I'm hoping I can try to write the last installment today or tomorrow, muse willing. <3

twilightscribe December 10 2008, 00:32:05 UTC

Well, to you I wish the best of luck! Muses are terribly fickle aren't they? *glares at her own*

boundary December 10 2008, 16:59:31 UTC

They areeee. I'm currently suck at 1400 words and want to stab my muse and order a new one. LOL.

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rinhail April 19 2011, 18:38:47 UTC

i have quite a bit of catching up to do. :) but i enjoyed this first part very much. glad to already see the the first base covered. :D

onto the next part.