Comments | coley_merrin: [Fic] Company Time

coley_merrin

[Fic] Company Time - 1/10

Nov 21, 2010 15:09

Title: Company Time
Author: Coley Merrin
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Zhou Mi (either/or)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU

Summary: Kyuhyun's new coworker brings new challenges to his stuffy cubicle life. And the only problem bigger than realizing that Zhou Mi is living denial, is actually starting to believe him.

( Read more... )

pairing: qmi, fic: companytime, fic: super junior

Comments 79

nisakomi November 21 2010, 23:11:44 UTC

Spot!

nisakomi November 21 2010, 23:28:22 UTC

This is such a great idea and your writing is amazing as always.. Can't wait for the next part!

coley_merrin November 25 2010, 08:34:06 UTC

Hopefully will be a fun ride~ <3

Thank you~! <3

jirluvien November 21 2010, 23:12:43 UTC

Yay! Unfortunately, I can't read it now since I have to study that +%=?/% Greek...

jirluvien November 21 2010, 23:49:23 UTC

Or so I said. *sighs* I have a really important test tomorrow and here I am...

Whoa, 10 chapters. This is going to get complicated, isn't it? Or maybe not. Drama over drama is not your style. Whatever, I'm curious...

I love the last line XD

coley_merrin November 25 2010, 08:37:22 UTC

<3 Should not be TOO overly dramatic. I don't like having to shake people too hard too often. XD Get enough drama from the dramas! <3 ...I'm sure Zhou Mi would like Kyu to repeat his last question. XD~

Thank you~! <3

smashbox November 21 2010, 23:16:55 UTC

Wow, it's been a while since I found a good fic and yours is excellent ♥ keep up the good work! Everything is on point, the plot, and grammar :3 excellent!!

coley_merrin November 25 2010, 08:39:18 UTC

<3<3~ I hope you enjoy the rest of it! :) It's been a pleasure to write~

Thank you~! <3

g_odalisque13 November 21 2010, 23:20:02 UTC

new fic!
SPOT!

g_odalisque13 November 22 2010, 01:42:22 UTC

oh my god i love this so much.

the whole idea behind it is just brilliant and i love the characterization. it's especially interesting to read about Zhou Mi as the "straight" one.
but the way you wrote Kyuhyun's thoughts on the whole thing was so realistic. i know i always tell you that, but i just love the way you write the inner dialogue of your characters. it's always so relate-able and entertaining.

there were so many brilliant lines in here, i don't even know where to start.
but seriously amazing job!
i can't wait to read more!

coley_merrin November 25 2010, 08:44:00 UTC

It was nice to explore having Zhou Mi not being the pursuer so much. <3 They both had their own roles to play~ And it's so interesting to be able to explore with them through different emotions~ <3 So I'm so glad. :)

Thank you~! <3

(The comment has been removed)

coley_merrin November 25 2010, 09:09:15 UTC

Ooh...yes, 30cm has them topped by much. XD Kyu is just feeling put out that he might have to kiss up to someone a little. XD

Ooh, vocab with QMi...apparently I need them to teach me Korean or Mandarin, lol. It teaches me, too, when I use a word and sometimes have to think...am I using that right, I forget? >.>

I love exploring facets of Zhou Mi... I don't always get them right, or as well as I'd like, but I still love it. <3 He's so much more than he's portrayed sometimes. <3

...lol. If there's anything that stresses me more than titling a fic, or summarizing a fic, it's naming an OC. XD So it was less Kyu's aversion than mine. >.>;;;; So yeah, I just found the easiest way to make the name never come up. XD The fic would've gone forever if Mi had kept dating her. XD

Poor inebriated them. <3 And hohoho...He wanted it AND he liked it. Sigh. I will never get over that solo. *___*;;;;;;

And the struggle between pervert and romantic, lol...this is familiar to me. XD;;;

Will be working hard~~

Thank you~! <3