Hard Times Don't Come Until Tomorrow (1/1)

Oct 01, 2010 10:23

Title: Hard Times Don't Come Until Tomorrow
Genre: Television
Series: Haven
Characters: Audrey Parker, Nathan Wournos
Spoilers: 1x9 - As You Were
Rating: PG
Summary: She can't seem to find the right combination of 'different' to make this day end.
Prompt: serenitymeimei - Time loop AU. What if there was a troubled person in Haven who had a serious grudge against ( Read more... )

haven

Leave a comment

Comments 31

serenitymeimei October 1 2010, 17:31:14 UTC
*SQUEEEEEE* How freaking awesome was this? I loved it!!! Everything flowed nicely and was pieced together in a way that left you guessing and wanting mroe. Plus, the fact that Audrey totally took the chance to make out with not only Nathan, but Duke as well? *giggles* So. Much. WIN!

THANK YOU!!!!

Reply

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 17:46:18 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Like I said...it quickly spiralled into a monster. I started writing and I realized I wanted to write specific things and that required lead-up, and then I couldn't really make the "troubled" person evil, because on the show, none of them have really been evil so far! They all turn out to be victims themselves, really, so then I had to craft an O.C. but I wanted to do it in a way that wasn't irritating or ingratiating but natural, and...*shrugs* Even my comment on it becomes a monster.

Reply

serenitymeimei October 1 2010, 18:24:34 UTC
Lol! But, oh what an awesome monster it turned out to be... Seriously, I wish you'd fill MORE prompts. Your writing style is fabulous! Very fitting for Haven. I totally understand about making the troubled person non-evil, though. I regretted suggesting the whole "grudge" thing in the prompt the second I posted it, but I was too lazy to delete it, lol!

ps, I have so many prompts rolling around in my head that I could post on the meme, but I feel bad spamming it.. *facepalm*

Reply

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 18:32:00 UTC
Oh, psssht! Spam away. Clearly we have talented writers around that fandom and we need things that poke at the muses! I haven't written this much in months! It's can only be a good thing.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 17:46:28 UTC
Thanks!

Reply


badgirl2bad4u October 1 2010, 18:57:13 UTC
Daaawwwwww!!! :D I loved this. Absolutely positively LOVED every minute of it. Thank you so much for giving a Nathan/Audrey-shipper like me such a wonderful serving of fluff! You rock!

Reply

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 19:01:27 UTC
Thanks! *pouts* You called it fluff! I can't believe I'm a part of a fandom that has me writing fluff.

Reply

badgirl2bad4u October 1 2010, 19:05:53 UTC
Shit. Umm...I take it back? Not fluff. Definitely not fluff. Who said fluff? It's um...romantic pre-smut sweetness? *smiles hopefully* Don't mind me and my mistaken use of the word - I sorta lump anything that has a pairing getting together without smut as being 'fluff'. Sowwy!

Reply

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 19:08:25 UTC
*huggles Being Human icon awesomeness*

Nah, it's okay. *peruses fanfiction archive* I'm just generally...umm...I tend to darker fic than fluff. LOL.

Reply


tpeej October 1 2010, 19:45:02 UTC
Oh my goodness. That was good.

Reply

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 19:46:45 UTC
Thanks!

Reply

tpeej October 1 2010, 20:21:26 UTC
You're welcome.

Reply


americanfairy October 1 2010, 20:30:48 UTC
Awww, I loved every single second of this! Never would have guessed that it was the paper boy causing all of that. And the bit about Audrey making out with Nathan and Duke, not to mention dancing on her desk, had me cracking up and saying "Wow!" all at the same time! This is most definitely made of win!

Reply

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 21:07:19 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. (Also, I'm ridiculously fond of little Peter in this. Kinda thinking of adding an angsty sequel that involves Audrey using him to save someone she loves...)

Reply

americanfairy October 1 2010, 21:55:53 UTC
Oooh, that would be sweet! Could it be to save Nathan maybe? LOL, I'm letting my imagination get ahead of me.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up