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Hard Times Don't Come Until Tomorrow (1/1)

Oct 01, 2010 10:23

Title: Hard Times Don't Come Until Tomorrow
Genre: Television
Series: Haven
Characters: Audrey Parker, Nathan Wournos
Spoilers: 1x9 - As You Were
Rating: PG
Summary: She can't seem to find the right combination of 'different' to make this day end.
Prompt: serenitymeimei - Time loop AU. What if there was a troubled person in Haven who had a serious grudge against ( Read more... )

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Comments 31

introspectacles October 1 2010, 20:42:50 UTC

"Like, for instance, don't wait for the mountain to move when you can go to the mountain."

I... loved that so much. SO MUCH. I think this is my favorite N/A fic by far. You got the dynamics between them perfectly--I felt like I was actually watching the show. And that line I quoted? Completely and utterly Nathan/Audrey. Fits them to a tee! Write more please? This was so great.

cold_queen_5 October 1 2010, 21:08:02 UTC

Oh, wow! I'm glad you liked it so much. It did kinda pwn my soul for the hours it took to write it.

gagewhitney October 1 2010, 21:26:14 UTC

>>“Oh, Nathan. 'When you make a move'? Have you met you? You don't have any moves.”

LMAO! He so doesn't, and Audrey knows it.

Great job! I loved this.

cold_queen_5 October 2 2010, 06:36:28 UTC

He really doesn't! That's what makes him so adorable!

I'm glad you like it!

bluewillowtree October 1 2010, 21:38:55 UTC

I love this! Audrey and Nathan are so completely right, and Peter is really kind of adorable. And the end = ♥ I laughed with Audrey; she's so right!

cold_queen_5 October 2 2010, 06:39:06 UTC

Thanks!

odakota_rose October 9 2010, 08:22:27 UTC

Omg, there is an X-File in my Haven and I love it.
XD

No seriously, this was awesome!

redbrunja May 13 2011, 04:38:15 UTC

Oh, man, this was fantastic. I love how you build the sense of the day repeating and especially Nathan's answer in the end.