Prompt Me, Peeps!

[coffeethyme4me]

I feel like all I've written this year is three giant fics. Which is great! I'm not complaining at all. It's just that I've posted two of them, and although I'm loving the third, I feel like I've worked LARGE for so long that I need a SMALL break from the sheer size

Comments

[secretsolitaire]

Peter/El/Neal, apology.

Undeniable

[coffeethyme4me]

~430

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[sdkshelly]

That was beautiful. I particularly love that line about the breeze being less than refreshing. Lovely!

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[elrhiarhodan]

Oh, so very beautiful. I've teared up.

I've gone from hot to hungry to tearful in three clicks of my mouse's scroll wheel.

You are amazing!

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[secretsolitaire]

Oh, how lovely is this! My heart broke a little here:

He never asks the right way or for the right things. He never accepts what Neal has to offer, only demands what Neal can never give.

And the last line too. *sniffle* Gorgeous take on the prompt, thank you! ♥

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[kanarek13]

Beautiful and so heartbreaking. Poor Neal. I love it that it was Peter who apologized in the end and healed at least a small piece of that aching heart. Awwww...

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[rabidchild]

Simply beautiful. You are the ficlet queen!

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[memole81]

Very beautiful!

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[china_shop]

Ohhhhhh, so beautiful! (Here via secretsolitaire's rec.)

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[coffeethyme4me]

Oh thank you! I'll have to thank SS, too. :-D

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[trialanderror12]

@.@ You just made my cry.... This was so beautiful!

~T

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[coffeethyme4me]

Oh, thank you!!!!