Comments | coffeethyme4me: Ficlet: "Burn", Peter/Neal, R

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Ficlet: "Burn", Peter/Neal, R

Mar 28, 2012 13:20

Title: Burn
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pairing: peter/neal, rating: r, elrhiarhodan's muse is stalking me, white collar, ficlet, kink: beard burn, kink: rimming, kink: blowjob, kink: sex in public

Comments 15

elrhiarhodan March 28 2012, 20:37:57 UTC

GUH

and

GUH

More coherence to follow.

and

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

coffeethyme4me March 28 2012, 20:43:26 UTC

:-D :-D :-D!!!!!!!!!!

You're absolutely welcome.

daria234 March 29 2012, 06:07:47 UTC

Ooh, hot but also funny. HA to the setting.

love it when Peter leaves him almost speechless :)

coffeethyme4me March 29 2012, 16:07:52 UTC

THANK YOU!!! I'm happy you liked it. The setting idea did make me giggle. ;-) And Neal speechless is certainly something for Peter to be very proud of.

lauracollared March 31 2012, 01:23:59 UTC

Hoooot and funny! I definitely LOLed. But I also really adored the "wish I could kiss you" line. dawww.

coffeethyme4me March 31 2012, 01:48:40 UTC

YAY! Thanks so much! I'm glad it hit three different tones for you.

phantomminuet March 31 2012, 20:40:09 UTC

Made me smile.

And I wish Neal could kiss Peter, too.

coffeethyme4me March 31 2012, 20:41:41 UTC

Thanks! Adore the icon!

phantomminuet March 31 2012, 20:44:34 UTC

Thanks. That's one of mine.

coffeethyme4me March 31 2012, 20:48:08 UTC

Well, good on ya! \o/ Is that one, too?

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anne_higgins April 14 2012, 23:04:11 UTC

LOL! That is fun and sexy! Now, can we have the PWP from the night before? :>

coffeethyme4me April 15 2012, 21:07:55 UTC

Thank you!!! I'll consider that. ;-)