Katekyou Hitman Reborn! » White Flag

Sep 16, 2008 09:33

Title White Flag
Character/Pairing TYL!Takeshi Yamamoto, TYL!Hayato Gokudera, and a TYL!Haru Miura cameo; perhaps slight implied Yamamoto/Gokudera
Rating PG-13 for moderate language and heavy emotional content
Warning Spoilers for chapters 137 and 140 mainly. Oh, and severe character angst.
Wordcount 1,095
Note About the title, read this if you are ( Read more... )

reborn!:gokudera, reborn!:yamamoto, reborn!

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galeaya September 16 2008, 15:27:30 UTC
gale: -sobs- N-nooo.. -sobs-
gokkyun: -sniff- stop crying, damn woman!
mocchan: but it's just too sad! ;____;
gokkyun: -teary eyed- you too, baseball freak!
gale: oh shut up, you two! They're dead!
mocchan: DX Waaaaah! Noooo!
gokkyun: well, technically they're not dead yet... that's set in the TYL universe, right?
gale: y-yes..
gokkyun: -determined look- then all we have to do is fix everything!
mocchan: can we really, Gokudera?!
gokkyun: Of course! Nothing's too hard for the Tenth's right hand man! For the Tenth!
gale: --; he never changes, does he?

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pekori September 17 2008, 07:19:58 UTC
XD; It's a wonder you haven't gone crazy with such vocal muses, deary!

But thank you so much for the review! (It even makes me sad to read it ;;)

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pekori September 17 2008, 07:21:47 UTC
That's sort of what happened to me when the idea first popped into my head (at work no less, so I couldn't even properly mope about it D:), but at least the present day kids are trying to make everything all better!

And thank you for your review! Those two words say a lot. ._.;;

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pekori September 17 2008, 22:11:39 UTC
Ah! Thank you! I really try hard to get emotions to convey correctly when I write! I'm not terribly good with a lot of the major mechanics (like setting, for example XD) so I try to make up for it with good narrative. :D

I am keeping you. You are good for my self-esteem. XD;

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monochrome_59 September 17 2008, 16:52:11 UTC
D:

S-So wonderful, it broke me ;__________;

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pekori September 17 2008, 22:14:15 UTC
D: *repairs and mends*

Thank you very much and I hope I don't break you with you the next one I write. ._.;

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pekori October 13 2008, 04:54:22 UTC
I feel so awful that this was the first bunny I ever got for these two. XD; IT'S SO MORBID AND AWFUL. But at least they have each other? ;;

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idiotsite November 4 2008, 20:45:33 UTC
ohh... wow. this was... good. i especially loved the end though one thing bothered me a little... Yamamotot doesn't call Gokudera Gokudera-kun. Or I'm wrong? Dunno. But it was just a tiny little thing loved this completely. <3

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pekori November 4 2008, 22:54:17 UTC
No, you're right about that. I only had him referring to him that way in his head, though, if you'll notice, never out loud. It was due to a sort of implied bond I imagined they'd developed over the years, and especially in light of the situation with Tsuna. Thank you very much, though!

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