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May 13, 2007 16:34

Then As it Was, Then Again it Will Be
Supernatural
Ellen; PG
900 words
A/N: a coda, of sorts, to "All Hell Breaks Loose, Part 1." Spoilers only for that ep. I know nothing of what's to come. Thanks to mcee for read-through.

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fandom: supernatural, pairing: ellen (gen)

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embroiderama May 13 2007, 21:08:18 UTC
Wow. Oh, Ellen. This hurt a lot, but it's also hopeful in a crazy way.

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coffee_in_bed May 13 2007, 21:18:27 UTC
i still can't believe they killed the roadhouse. i needed to do something with all the emo i was carrying around. :(

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tabaqui May 13 2007, 21:18:06 UTC
Oh!
*sniffle*

That's lovely. Totally *right* that she thinks for a moment of John... But oh...wow. That's just...perfect.

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coffee_in_bed May 13 2007, 21:25:21 UTC
thank you! i think john has a tendency to kind of sneak up on ellen, you know?

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loveflyfree May 13 2007, 22:09:49 UTC
So I think Kripke and Co. should do a couple of episodes that focus on Ellen next season and should totally hire you to write them because HOLY HELL this is so good. The details are just great (stick figure drawing!) and while I think you always do alll of your characters justice, it's also easy to see which characters you love the most. *sigh* This is perfect.

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coffee_in_bed May 13 2007, 22:12:25 UTC
my bias does show a little, doesn't it? :)

i think they should TOTALLY hire me to write the ellen/john backstory episode. omg i would PEE.

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dotfic May 13 2007, 22:49:25 UTC
Oh, wow, that hurt to read and I *needed* to read this right now.

Lovely descriptions, everything that was lost. The parallel she sees between herself and John was a particularly achey moment. And I just loved this:
In the end, she does the only thing she can: stand in the sun and the wind and cry herself out, quietly, her head bowed and her shoulders shaking. Take one last look at it all and see what was instead of what is. What might be again, someday.

Have nothing else but Oh, Ellen.

Beautiful work.

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coffee_in_bed May 13 2007, 22:55:41 UTC
i'm still so completely messed up over the roadhouse being gone, i had to DO something with it, you know? :\

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missyjack May 13 2007, 23:01:27 UTC
wonderful piece. RIP Roadhouse. great final sentence.

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coffee_in_bed May 13 2007, 23:04:45 UTC
thank you!

but GOD, i still can't believe the roadhouse is gone. :(

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