Last and Alone - Secret
Title: Part 6
Rating: T
Characters: Jazz, Perceptor
Warnings: Mech x Mech hinted at/mentioned occasionally
Universe: G1-ish AU/Last and Alone/Monolith
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I like that Jazz is not readily accepting the truth, because it is rather far-fetched. The poor guy's so confused!
is it bad that i went 'yay percy/jazz' when he asked to interface? XDD *runs away from angry prowl*
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And the Prowl x Jazz element allows for... Hmm... something later possibly.(depending on how the story writes).
Jazz was suppose to be a whole lot more difficult to Perceptor regarding this situation, but I think he really is in shock and only in the end remembering he's an officer and Special Op at that and maybe he should be concerned. XD
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I hope you keep writing. Poor Perceptor he's been through alot.
Pity you paired Jazz with Prowl, though. I was hoping for a bit of Jazz with Percy. Not that I don't like Jazz with Prowl.
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Thanks
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Minor nitpick though: "I suspect the Stunticons have the ability since Onslaught is Imperial Class and the rest of his team are Standard." The Stunticons are Motormaster's team. Onslaught is a Combaticon.
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That section gave me fits and has changed so much, not to mention how many times it's been removed and put back in. Perceptor initially wanted to disect all the teams for Jazz and I said "no way!"
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I love the details of the room they're in, like Sunstreaker's paintigs and the image captures.
Jazz's confusion is amusing, but I'm worried he's going to cause trouble for Perceptor. Everything is out in the open now. And it does indeed sound very much like Black Ops.
I love the descriptions of everything.
And I love the explanation on how he's fooled the medical scanners and why.
It's interesting how Perceptor refers to the war as "Your war." Not "this war" or "our war". "Your war." Like he's only part of it because he has no other options.
And the way Perceptor is always saying "in my time"... he's old, isn't he? He sounds very old, and very tired to me. I wonder if Jazz picked up on that. Has he hidden his age as well?
Before the Autobots found me, at the time we died
At the time we died. A slip of the tongue? Or does he really see that as the death of who he used to be ( ... )
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Sounds like how many ppl view Kup & Ironhide being the "oldest". Kup is much older than 'Hide, cuz he was active during the whole 9M+ years, whereas Hide had a 4.5M yr nap.
Excellent job. Love the references to "your war" and "only in your more modern times have you made interface=pleasure" Extra points for reminding "us" that they're robots w/ CPUs & dataports.
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