Last and Alone - Secret Part 6

Aug 07, 2008 18:22

 Last and Alone - Secret
Title:  Part 6
Rating:  T
Characters:  Jazz, Perceptor
Warnings:  Mech x Mech hinted at/mentioned occasionally
Universe:  G1-ish AU/Last and Alone/Monolith
Disclaimer: I, in no way, shape, or form, own the Transformers© franchise or the characters it contains.  They belong to Has/Tak, No infringement intended.  Any OC’s to my ( Read more... )

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okamichan August 8 2008, 01:03:29 UTC
Are you enjoying your endings like this??

I like that Jazz is not readily accepting the truth, because it is rather far-fetched. The poor guy's so confused!

is it bad that i went 'yay percy/jazz' when he asked to interface? XDD *runs away from angry prowl*

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cmdrtekk August 8 2008, 02:04:20 UTC
I will admit that Perceptor X Jazz was a consideration, but his broken team bonds are just going to leave him a mess in this AU and prevent deep relationships. Yeah, I'm putting him through the ringer.

And the Prowl x Jazz element allows for... Hmm... something later possibly.(depending on how the story writes).

Jazz was suppose to be a whole lot more difficult to Perceptor regarding this situation, but I think he really is in shock and only in the end remembering he's an officer and Special Op at that and maybe he should be concerned. XD

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umashino August 8 2008, 01:15:02 UTC
Wow this story gets deeper and deeper.

I hope you keep writing. Poor Perceptor he's been through alot.

Pity you paired Jazz with Prowl, though. I was hoping for a bit of Jazz with Percy. Not that I don't like Jazz with Prowl.

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cmdrtekk August 8 2008, 01:57:53 UTC
Perceptor X Jazz was a consideration, but his team bonds, broken though they may be will just prevent it in this AU. And the Prowl x Jazz element allows for... Hmm... something later.(possible plot device)

Thanks

:D

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umashino August 8 2008, 02:38:51 UTC
maybe after this you could maybe write a Jazz x Perceptor fic? *gives puppy dog eyes and bribes with cookies*

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cmdrtekk August 8 2008, 03:39:57 UTC
If they want to cooperate, I may give it a whirl. No promises though.

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kyra_neko_rei August 8 2008, 01:42:16 UTC
Ooooh, yes, update! I like! This is wonderfully deep and impressive.

Minor nitpick though: "I suspect the Stunticons have the ability since Onslaught is Imperial Class and the rest of his team are Standard." The Stunticons are Motormaster's team. Onslaught is a Combaticon.

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cmdrtekk August 8 2008, 01:51:37 UTC
*Palms face* I know that. XD

That section gave me fits and has changed so much, not to mention how many times it's been removed and put back in. Perceptor initially wanted to disect all the teams for Jazz and I said "no way!"

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kirin_saga August 8 2008, 02:29:13 UTC
*loves* Thief!Perceptor!

I love the details of the room they're in, like Sunstreaker's paintigs and the image captures.

Jazz's confusion is amusing, but I'm worried he's going to cause trouble for Perceptor. Everything is out in the open now. And it does indeed sound very much like Black Ops.

I love the descriptions of everything.

And I love the explanation on how he's fooled the medical scanners and why.

It's interesting how Perceptor refers to the war as "Your war." Not "this war" or "our war". "Your war." Like he's only part of it because he has no other options.

And the way Perceptor is always saying "in my time"... he's old, isn't he? He sounds very old, and very tired to me. I wonder if Jazz picked up on that. Has he hidden his age as well?

Before the Autobots found me, at the time we died

At the time we died. A slip of the tongue? Or does he really see that as the death of who he used to be ( ... )

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cmdrtekk August 8 2008, 02:59:27 UTC
You don't know how thrilled it makes me that someone definitely picked up on Perceptor referring to "your war" vs. "our war", "the war", "this war ( ... )

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okami_myrrhibis August 8 2008, 15:29:00 UTC
Regarding his age, while never directly referenced in this storyline, I figure that he actually will be in the range of the majority of the characters. His just got split up. He's got at least 7200 vorns on him as that is how long the team lived. So then we have whatever time before the team and then since.

Sounds like how many ppl view Kup & Ironhide being the "oldest". Kup is much older than 'Hide, cuz he was active during the whole 9M+ years, whereas Hide had a 4.5M yr nap.

Excellent job. Love the references to "your war" and "only in your more modern times have you made interface=pleasure" Extra points for reminding "us" that they're robots w/ CPUs & dataports.

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cmdrtekk August 10 2008, 21:48:07 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting.

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tainry August 8 2008, 06:20:23 UTC
Awesome. Love the depths you're plumbing here.
<3333333333333

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cmdrtekk August 8 2008, 15:05:43 UTC
Thank YOu.

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