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cmdrtekk

Last and Alone - Secret Part 6

Aug 07, 2008 18:22

Last and Alone - Secret
Title: Part 6
Rating: T
Characters: Jazz, Perceptor
Warnings: Mech x Mech hinted at/mentioned occasionally
Universe: G1-ish AU/Last and Alone/Monolith
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mmouse15 August 10 2008, 04:26:26 UTC

Such a fabulous chapter. I really admire Perceptor's courage, and was fascinated by the differences in perception (sorry, no better word) between Percy and Jazz about the war, about interfacing, about many things. Perceptor really does know a lot of things that Jazz doesn't, and that really came through in this chapter.

cmdrtekk August 10 2008, 21:48:25 UTC

Thank you.

snugsbunny September 12 2008, 10:23:41 UTC

I love this chapter XD

I absolutely love the dialogue and interaction you have in it. I had to read it twice because it is *that* good.

I know there's no action, but the whole chapter, going from the paintings and pictures to Jazz and Percy's interaction, is just flaming marvellous.

Gods you're such a master at writing.