Spirits of the Heart: Chapter Four

[clover_brush]

Title: Spirits of the Heart
Fandom/Original: Super Junior
Pairing(s): Heechul/Kyuhyun
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): Language
Summary: A devastating car accident leaves Kyuhyun with nothing but silence and nightmares. But Kyuhyun is not left to face this alone. Heechul visits him every day in the hospital, leaving on the promise to come back the next

Comments

[rurouneko]

SDKJFKGSDJ WHY IS KYUCHUL SO CUTE WHY
I HAVE NOT READ KYUCHUL AS CUTE AS THIS EVER

If you're about to write thank you and ask for your laptop again, forget it," Heechul interrupted, I LOL'D Heechul you are always one step further of everyone, that includes Kyuhyun XD

And SQUEALS I like how Kyuhyun got blushed because of Heechul. Magnae can never win against the original evil LOL

[belovedseason]

I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so much. :3 ♥ I tried to make this chapter a little more light-hearted & fluffy than last.

Kyuhyun will learn with time not to trifle with his evil-sunbae. n__n

[inkcharm_666]

I love that you followed up the last, emotionally heavy chapter with something so much more lighthearted and fun. The banter between Kyuhyun and Heechul is delightful. Bratty little Kyuhyun, not even a horrible car accident can quell his addictions or his behaviour. *ruffles his hair* And I love how Heechul just yanks his chain here, it's lovely. I Would like to pick out a favourite part of this, but I honestly can't. It's just adorable and wonderful all over. You did a really great job at capturing their essence and subtly showing how similar they can be through all their difference. I love their chemistry in this piece; it doesn't feel forced for the sake of pairing, but the way the situation grows feels very real, if that makes any sense.

I think the sponge bath line just absolutely killed me. I had pretty much tthe same reaction Kyuhyun had there xD

There's only one thing left I could possibly say, though...

MOAR ;A;

[belovedseason]

I can't honestly say if the next chapter is gonna be a downer or not, but I'm probably always going to try to balance out the angst with some light stuff every now and again. I honestly can't stand straight angst fics with things like this because I feel like that's unrealistic. You have up & down moments in real life for all situations. If I held a gun to your head though - what part would you pick as your favorite?

I thought of that last night & laid in bed for a few minutes laughing at what a genius I am. n___n kekekekeke

IT WILL BE A WHILE. But I promise there will be more. ♥

[na_jin_br]

Omg, I'm loving it. It's so different from everything I've ever read, it's a brand new and amazing idea based on a real fact, those always make the best stories. Kyuhyun and Heechul's interactions are really interesting, I just think their personalities can make an awesome combination.
This is why I'm nudging you to write )8 I hope you will keep on posting one chapter daily 8D
Thank you for sharing! :DD

[belovedseason]

I'm really surprised that something like this hasn't been done before. I was actually kinda worried someone else had already taken this and run with it. lmfao I'm glad to know I'm a pioneer. 8) I think that's part of the reason why they're an easy pairing for me to write - they just mesh very well.

;A; I don't think I can during the weekends because of work, but probably during the week? Who knows~
No, thank you for reading & supporting. ♥

[na_jin_br]

Awn okay )8 Gonna be waiting ;AAA;

[shadow_kitty47]

awww that last sentence.....

great work :)

[belovedseason]

I'm glad you're enjoying it. ♥ :3

[seneferia]

Just finished reading all chapters I'm like half asleep so forgive me if this is not coherent. Thank you for the link. I like that your writing this relationship its rarely seen. I like the way you write Heechul he's not overly bitchy like most people write him as. He seems a lot more real in this. I can't wait to read more.

[belovedseason]

Haha, you were very coherent bb. ♥

Someone else mentioned that it was rare to see Heechul written like this. I just...idk, I find bitchy Heechul hard to believe. D: He's tough, but he's a softy imo when you get down to it. I'm glad, however, that everyone seems to like this portrayal. I think I do a pretty good Heechul if I may be so bold/egotistical. ;)

I don't know when the next chapter will be done, but hopefully soonish. I got school papers to write so I don't know when I'll get to it. 8( Boo on school