Comments | cloudedge: [Fanfic] The Widow and Her Mate

cloudedge

[Fanfic] The Widow and Her Mate

Dec 02, 2006 02:55

Title: The Widow and Her Mate
Rating: PG
Theme: Study of Meyrin (?) Implied A->C
Word Count: 873

Comments and Constructive Criticism are welcomed

Disclaimer: I don’t own Mobile Suit Gundam SEED/DESTINY or any of its characters

Summary: Meyrin desperately needs to know if she still loves Athrun because she knows so clearly that he still loves her ( Read more... )

fanfic, gsd, cagalli

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jgal87 December 2 2006, 21:42:36 UTC

^^;; Well, I think its' okay *sweatdrop* I should not read this, now I get more ideas on the so called AthrunMeyrin thingy -_-();; *faint* never mind, I think I am dumping my so called idea in my ongoing trilogy =_=

cloudedge December 3 2006, 00:53:29 UTC

awww :( why do you want to drop your trilogy, you've written so much?

jgal87 December 3 2006, 09:24:06 UTC

no... you misunderstood me... I am absolutely not giving up on my trilogy -_-();; I spend so much time and efforts on it, and am still editing them... how could I gave them up... They are my flesh and blood, my baby XDD

I mean, I am going to modify my fic ...so that it can incorporate my latest idea on Athrun/meyrin too ^^;; XD

cloudedge December 4 2006, 06:52:29 UTC

oh ic ic... well good luck with the fic :)
it must be hard to work on something so long...

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ohwhatsherface December 3 2006, 00:43:26 UTC

poor meyrin. she should save herself all the trouble and give up on the guy because he is just way too complicated on the inside. XD the girl should sooooo get with kira... LOL i swear you got me obsessed with that pairing!

cloudedge December 3 2006, 00:55:54 UTC

haha, well Athrun is just too wishy-washy and undecisive... and Cagalli, her situation is just too complex... but I'm glad I got the idea that the ACM situation is complicated ^^; And for Meyrin who is young and free, it really isn't worth the trouble to get tangle in this mess....

and KM lol~ serious... I initially really meant them to be a a crack couple lol

angrycherokee December 3 2006, 04:06:49 UTC

AHHH this is great. I'm glad that you've had enough time in your whirlwind schedule to write something :D
I adore the "I love my country" bit; I can imagine her sitting her hands on top of her desk and saying it in that neutral-yet-pained tone you described so well in this.
I think the title fits perfectly, too, especially considering Cagalli's pain associated with Athrun (having a "dead" partner, almost in a non-angry "you're-dead-to-me" way if that makes any sense, rofl).
I noticed a few tense problems, but otherwise it's great.
And I don't think Meyrin was bashed at all.
*fav*

cloudedge December 3 2006, 04:51:03 UTC

thx :D I really don't have time to write this, but I have been slacking off >w<; so instead of writing my report last night I wrote this. XD

Yeah, one of the reason why I wrote this is to contrast Meyrin's "freedom" and ability to pursue her love against Cagalli's imprisonment so to speak, because of her duty (which is express in that "I love my country" line.)

It's also my attempt to try to view AC and Athrun in a slightly better light... (after reading some fics by ohwhatsherface) because in a sense, Athrun is also locked up in his life because of her choice ( ... )

angrycherokee December 4 2006, 02:41:09 UTC

A little procrastination doesn't hurt, but don't let it consume you :P ( ... )

cloudedge December 4 2006, 22:15:50 UTC

heehee, yeah it feels good to my procrastinating self again XD I only have one midterm left (tmr which I still haven't start studying but I think I should be able to manage :D ( ... )

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