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[claudia_lexan]

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[deanlives]

Oh I can't wait. I hope you update soon.

[claudia_lexan]

Will hopefull be posting another update within a week.

[marylizh]

oh, no, no. You cant leave it there!!! Dang it, Dean!!!

[claudia_lexan]

They do work things out in the next couple of chapters, but like all things I tend to write with a supernatural mpreg, it doesn't last

[marylizh]

why does that scare me??

[claudia_lexan]

On the version I have posted on Fanfiction.net I'm positively evil when it comes to Dean. With this new and improved one on livejournal, I'm trying to be nice, but with a lot of angst

[my_sam_dean]

The end to this update left me breathless. I can't wait until the next update. Somehow, Sam has to catch Dean so they can work this out.

[claudia_lexan]

I'm trying to write a story, where there is no quick fix. I don't want everything to be sorted out in a few chapters. For that reason this story will be long and different from the verison I currently have posted on fanfiction.net.

[billysgirl5]

I didn't like Dean very much in this chapter. Dean was being cruel, plain cruel. He can't fault Sam for not remembering what all happened between them. Sam is regaining some of his memories...whose to say he won't remember everything? At least Sam was willing to try. Dean's too worried about getting hurt again. He's not taking into consideration Sam's feelings for the child (who won't know his/her other parent). Like I said, Dean was just cruel.

[claudia_lexan]

It was my intention for Dean to come across as less than nice to Sam. Usually in most stories Dean protects his brother and gives in far to easily. I wanted Dean to still believe that he had to do this without Sam's help. The curse hasn't been broken . That means any relationship he will have with Sam won't last. So his being cruel to save himself some future heartache

[idiot4dean]

Knew the meeting wouldn't end well but that had my heart jumping all over the place. Not sure who I feel sorry for!!! They both were too stubborn and not trying to compromise. I can understand Dean's concerns and Sam wanting normal doesn't help. Sam was making plans without even considering Dean as part of the set up even though he's the one having the baby. Unfortunately for Dean he told Sam where the doctors are, so he won't get rid of Sam that easily.

Looking forward to more.

[claudia_lexan]

Sam does catch up with Dean in two chapters Time. Both of them will realize how stubborn they have been, and have that little bit of happiness As the curse hasn't been broken, and only one of them can be happy, it's not going to end well.