Rain Storm, part 1

[claudia603]

Surprise! Another fic...I wanted to originally condense this into a short story, but I realized that the way I wanted this to develop was much slower than a short story could warrant

Comments

[kookaburra1701]

Awww-
Such a nice little piece to read for the first fanfic I've allowed myself to read since I came back to school.

[claudia603]

Awww...and welcome back! *hugs* Thanks!

[irda]

*squees* That was awesome, I can't wait for the next installment! :D You've definitely caught my attention, and I very rarely get hooked on WIP's. More, moooore!

[claudia603]

Thank you!! And I am so mad at myself for starting another WIP, lol...but these days I just have to go where the muse leads or I won't write at all..:-) Thank you for reading!! :-)

[layne67]

“Curse it to death and darkness,” Boromir muttered. As he bent to gather the books, he offered Frodo a flustered smile. “I am sorry. Everything here is so graceful. I cannot seem to walk anywhere without bumbling.”

I think you've got Boromir spot on here. The flustered smile, the muttered swearing, his perceived clumsiness as compared to the elves' gracefulness.

I cant wait for the storm to come!

[claudia603]

Thank you! Yeah, I should think that Boromir would feel a bit like the bull in the china shop there....:-) Thank you for reading! ;-)

[illwynd]

Wow, what a beginning! This is already the best Fr/B I've seen... Can't wait to see more! ^__^

[claudia603]

Wow, thank you! :-)

[trianne]

Aw, thank you so much! I could see and hear movie Boromir and Frodo saying their lines and moving around one another in the library, both awkward and shy. There's such a gentleness here, at least in the first chapter (wink wink) and I loved that. So what I needed to read this evening :) Thank you again!

[claudia603]

yay! Glad you liked! Me, too! *hugs* And more coming soon...I'm inspired...