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Oct 09, 2004 23:41

This is ALL baranduin's fault. Yep, she started an angst trend today with her Green Hill (go to her journal and read it -- I"m too lazy to link)

Title: Lingering
Author: Claudia
Rating: G
Category: Gen, though you can see the F/S if you squint your eyes.
Summary: Letting go is difficult when ghosts haunt.
Warning: rather angsty

Lingering, rated G )

lingering, lotr fiction

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mariole October 10 2004, 03:50:54 UTC
Oh, Claudia. What lovely and moving imagery. Wonderful. Thank you.

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 05:08:38 UTC
Thank you! <3

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bellamonte October 10 2004, 03:56:14 UTC
You very well could read this with a mind in the gutter and come up with something slightly different. ;)

Marvelous! I love your descriptions, Frodo's eyes "dulling over like a lake on a cloudy day." And the whole idea of Sam's inability to really truly feel Frodo gone afterwards, that opens up a fresh grief for all of us still crying after the Grey Havens scene in Rotk.

Wonderful!

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 05:08:17 UTC
Well, one can ALWAYS put one's mind in the gutter, eh? ;-D

Thank you! Yes, there is something about that kind of grief...:-)

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danachan October 10 2004, 04:48:11 UTC
Oh, this is gorgeous, Claudia. *sigh*

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 05:07:03 UTC
Thank you! I had no intention of writing this today -- it just came out! ;-)

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lorie945 October 10 2004, 06:01:22 UTC
If you all are going to continue writing heartbreaking angst, I'll just go off and kill myself right now.

This is why Frodo/Sam is so popular, you know. The incredibly high angst-quotient.

Really lovely, Claudia.

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 14:31:47 UTC
I dont' know what it is about the angst bug, I just can't explain it. Yes (about F/S), though you could argue the same about Frodo/Boromir, I suppose, lol. Okay, well, I'm just being difficult.

Thank you!

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ethereal_hobbit October 10 2004, 11:29:23 UTC
Ooooh! *sobs*

It breaks my heart... but I love it! <3

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 14:32:08 UTC
Thank you for reading! <3

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