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Oct 09, 2004 23:41

This is ALL baranduin's fault. Yep, she started an angst trend today with her Green Hill (go to her journal and read it -- I"m too lazy to link)

Title: Lingering
Author: Claudia
Rating: G
Category: Gen, though you can see the F/S if you squint your eyes.
Summary: Letting go is difficult when ghosts haunt.
Warning: rather angsty

Lingering, rated G )

lingering, lotr fiction

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angharad001 October 10 2004, 11:39:17 UTC
Damn it! You made me cry!

Beautiful writing *sniffle*

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 14:32:28 UTC
Awww...Thank you!! *hugs*

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elwenlj October 10 2004, 11:47:20 UTC
Claudia . . . I love this. I don't know what to say. You say so much within it. I could cry.

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 14:36:40 UTC
Thank you! *hugs*

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shirebound October 10 2004, 13:44:02 UTC
Wow, that's great. Maybe Sam had to work harder at not being torn in two than we thought he did. Thank goodness for his family.

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 14:33:35 UTC
I suspect he did! Thank you!

I finally watched the pilot from Lost that I had taped weeks ago...I can see where you're coming from now, yes I can, *g*

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baranduin October 10 2004, 14:28:13 UTC
This is gorgeous, every last word of it. I think the heart of it is:

“That don’t stop me from missing him.”

Because even though he's trying hard not to be torn in two, the middle of the night is a hard time when you can just about hear him in the next room.

Really beautiful, Claudia.

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 14:34:41 UTC
Thank you!! I have no idea what made me write that yesterday, but, the muses are to be obeyed and glad it came out the way I intended...:-) Thank you!

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tiriel_35 October 10 2004, 15:15:34 UTC
I didn't have to squint at all. Lovely, Claudia - thank you!

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claudia603 October 10 2004, 15:45:30 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! :-)

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