1. excessive use of the passive tense. 2. long sentences with little variation in structure. 3. repetitive adjectives/jargon-y nouns. 4. unclear/indefinite use of 'this'
"This makes my seventh summer without respite in this country, and I long for the completion of this question of revision in order that I may take some rest, get Japan off the brain and recover lost strength."[1
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as previously stated, I am going to india (mumbai, goa, etc.) today and back in singapore on the morning of 29 august. arriving in london on the morning of 5 sept.
in india I will be contactable in the case of emergency on my singapore mobile number (which remains the same as previously).
oh god. harry potter. I read my first when I was 12, I wrote fic when I was 14, I fell out of love and into angst when I was 16, and now I am nearly 20 and - it's done
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