Prison Break - (Beyond) Trust

[clair_de_lune]

Title: (Beyond) Trust
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln
Categories: Slash, het
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 1505
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: He trusts them - with his life, eyes closed and everything; that’s neither the question nor the issue. (Post-series, alternate

Comments

[tuesdaeschild]

OMG!! OMG!! For now all I can manage is HOT!!! Analysis can wait until tomorrow when I might be capable of forming some coherent thoughts!

And the cheating? You're utterly forgiven! UTTERLY!!

Now where did I put the 3some I started...

[clair_de_lune]

And the cheating? You're utterly forgiven!
*wipes forehead* ;)

I whined a bit to myself (and to torigates) because I wanted it less smutty and more 'thinky' than it turned out, but if you're fine with more smutty and less 'thinky', I'm fine too *g*

Now where did I put the 3some I started...
Don't lose that file! ;)

[tuesdaeschild]

I'm fine with more smutty and less 'thinky'...but there was some quality 'thinky' in there too! :)

The file is still in my documents!! Phew!! ;)

[tuesdaeschild]

Right...coherent! I can read it again and do coherent! I hope!

I think the title is really clever because Sara and Lincoln really are asking for something from Michael that is almost impossible for him to give so it's definitely beyond trust. And he did ask a lot of Lincoln and Sara during the breakout and beyond. You always manage to justify so brilliantly!

Ambiguous pleasure is just right and the line He likes keeping them happy is the perfect fit right where it is and it's perfectly Michael! :)

There's something deliciously kinky in Sara and Lincoln kissing so close to Michael yet he's helpless to do anything. In fact the whole story is full of deliciously kinky moments as they take complete control of the situation...and Michael!!

“But you know how good he feels, don’t you, Michael? So thick and hot and owning you...”And there's another kinky little notion!!! Sara really knows how to tease, doesn't she

[clair_de_lune]

*nods* It's trust in a way that makes him totally vulnerable to them.

And he did ask a lot of Lincoln and Sara during the breakout and beyond.

Asking a lot of Lincoln before the breakout was more or less justified, since all he did was for Lincoln (and for himself because I keep thinking there was a fair amount of selfishness in his endeavour), although Lincoln didn't ask anything in the first place. But Sara? And to some extent even Lincoln after the breakout? A lot indeed.

There's something deliciously kinky in Sara and Lincoln kissing so close to Michael yet he's helpless to do anything.

Lincoln mentions Michael's fears at some point in the fic. Imagining Lincoln and Sara getting together and abandoning him would definitely be one of them, although I didn't want to mention it clearly because I already used this in Bitter Raspberries. So I guess it both plays on his fears and reassures him since they stick around ^__

[tuesdaeschild]

It's trust in a way that makes him totally vulnerable to them.

And that's something that doesn't comes easily to Michael, isn't it?

I do agree that Michael was driven a lot by selfishness but maybe in the way that he felt bad for being the cause of Linc's predicament and to make himself feel better he went with the plan? And possibly the same with Sara...he felt responsible and needed to exonerate himself? There are so many complications in their relationships we could find so many motivations for Michael! :)

So I guess it both plays on his fears and reassures him since they stick around ^__^

Nicely ambiguous! There's more of the 'thinky' lurking here than you thought!:)

You're right that as a one-shot it works perfectly as Sara being a darn good tease but one day (soon!) when you write the base fic the extra textures of provocation and taunting will add another enjoyable flavour to this awesome verse