Prison Break - A Kiss

Aug 15, 2010 17:28

Title: A Kiss
Author: clair-de-lune
Fandom: Prison Break
Characters: Michael/Lincoln (implied Michael/Sara)
Category: Slash
Rating: R
Warning: Incest
Word Count: ~ 620
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: Whatever it takes to have him stop hurting and brooding. (Set during 2.20 Panama)
Author’s Note: Written for rosie-spleen’s Bleeding Cuticles Read more... )

fanfic: english, fic: one shot, pairing: michael/lincoln, category: slash, fandom: prison break, category: pwp, comm: kissbingo, writing: bleeding cuticles

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tuesdaeschild August 16 2010, 19:14:40 UTC
Even when you're writing naughtily there is definitely an element of This could have happened. We didn't see what went on during the trip on that freighter!

And the hint of something happening years before? That could well have happened too!

And then, on the morning after, deafening silence, because how the hell are you supposed to broach this kind of the subject?

You are so brilliant at this kind of thing!!

Liked it very much!

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clair_de_lune August 16 2010, 21:12:14 UTC
We didn't see what went on during the trip on that freighter!
Sometimes, those PTB left convenient holes in their timeline ^__^

I've totally under-used the trip on the freighter in my fics. Besides this one, I think I've only written another story on board, It's Those Hands. It's a sad, sad overlook, because a few days locked together in a cabin...? Too bad Sara literally missed the ship.

I have a soft spot for the "it happened once before" thing. I guess it's because, although the desire is here, they fight the dirty-wrong-bad-ness of the relationship but can "relapse" at any moment. Which may or may not happen here, by the way, since I've been bad and left the ending open :-p

Thank you, Foxy :)

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tuesdaeschild August 25 2010, 16:51:10 UTC
I'm going for some more catching up...

Sometimes, those PTB left convenient holes in their timeline ^__^

Which quite a lot of people filled quite beautifully...usually you and foophile!! :)

I do remember "It's Those Hands" since I definitely have a fetish for those long, elegant fingers...OMG!!! Don't get me going on them...And yes, it is a pity that Sara missed the ship boat entirely!! *giggles*

You're right though; so much could be done with the trip on the freighter and perhaps there should be a comm...freighterpr0n or something?!!

they fight the dirty-wrong-bad-ness of the relationship but can "relapse" at any moment.

That is definitely a good thing to have a soft spot for and it would be wonderful if it happened here. Like they might unfreeze and really go for it!! Hmmmm...there's a nice thought!

You're welcome, as always, dear. :)

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clair_de_lune August 27 2010, 10:39:55 UTC
I do remember "It's Those Hands" since I definitely have a fetish for those long, elegant fingers
I was about to mock say "Really? But there aren't even handcuffs in that story." But there are handcuffs in that story, although it's mostly Lincoln fantasizing. How sad is it that I don't even remember what I wrote? *shakes head*

Thinking of it, I had a scene on the freighter in Equilibrium, but there is hardly any smut in that story.

there's a nice thought!
*fights it, fights it* I don't want to write a sequel. Well, I do *g* but not really because I want to keep my open ending. That said, a sequel may also be about Michael shouting at Lincoln, angry that Linc's waited so long - not to mention Sara's entrance in Michael's life - to start someting :-p

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freaky_nea August 18 2010, 18:59:13 UTC
Oh! Yes! Kisses! I'm with Michael on this and want more!

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clair_de_lune August 18 2010, 20:11:17 UTC
Well, they're locked together in a cabin for a few days... They have to find a way to kill time, I guess, so who knows? ;)

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It's nice to see a few people still reading and commenting on Michael/Lincoln stuff :D

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freaky_nea August 18 2010, 22:13:49 UTC
Exactly. They really REALLY need to... kill some time together... *cough*

They are irressistable and your writing style is amazing, how could I not read it? As long as there is no Sarah, I'm game.

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clair_de_lune August 19 2010, 13:04:16 UTC
Now, given Michael seems rather pissed off, go figure how (not) fun the killing time thing may turn...

lol yes. I tend to write a fair amount of Michael/Lincoln/Sara these days. At least, in this case, the implied Michael/Sara was partly the reason for the kiss ;)

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clair_de_lune August 19 2010, 13:06:28 UTC
By all means, roll around ;)

To be honest, I miss writing stories a bit more substantial, but given my fic list of M/L and the way I feel about the show, I'm rather grateful that I can still write them and keep a few people interested and entertained.

Thanks so much :)

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Lincoln Burrows, Man of Action! amodalie August 18 2010, 23:00:09 UTC
*gasp*

They stare at each other. Panting probably. And I'm holding my breath. Not wanting to disturb them.

This is a perfect ending. Leaving me all WTF, how can she stop here, I want more! But it's wise of you to stop there. Like this, it could actually have happened!

You are genius at capturing these moments and feelings! And it has a private feel to it. Like we are peeping into their cabin without them noticing.

(Another thing: I'm lost! How do you call it when something that happens during a rather short timespan is told over a much, much longer one? There is a clever word for it, and I know that I know it, but cannot grasp it. Aargh... Buggers! Never mind... ;) )

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Re: Lincoln Burrows, Man of Action! clair_de_lune August 19 2010, 13:07:23 UTC
I know. I'm a bad person. It's not even fading to black, it's abrupt cutting *g*

In my defense... First, I wrote it for kissbingo, and I'm going to try not to take things further than kisses in those fics. (This one is always better than the 'daydream' prompt I wrote for Sara/Kellerman, in which all Kellerman gets is daydreaming about kissing her. Sort of.)

Second, I didn't want to answer the question will they? The joy of open endings...

Argh. I do not thank you! Now, I'm wondering too about that clever word ;) If you remember, don't hesitate to let me know.

I do thank you for the comment, though ;)

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Re: Lincoln Burrows, Man of Action! amodalie August 23 2010, 09:05:37 UTC
--Argh. I do not thank you! Now, I'm wondering too about that clever word ;) If you remember, don't hesitate to let me know.

Nope, still don't remember the clever word, to be honest I'm not so sure anymore there was one in the first place^^ I remembered these German expressions for narrative style though: "zeitdehnend" = time stretching, "zeitraffend" = time compressing and "zeitdeckend" = time covering. That was probably what I meant...

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Re: Lincoln Burrows, Man of Action! clair_de_lune August 24 2010, 10:45:33 UTC
I'm not so sure anymore there was one in the first place^^
That would certainly explain why you can't remember it o_O

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jolietjones August 20 2010, 00:09:09 UTC
Love this!

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clair_de_lune August 20 2010, 10:30:56 UTC
Thanks a lot :)

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