What a great episode. Enjoyed it tremendously! You've got the befuddled, embarrassed Orlando to a T and I love the way you've portrayed Monica. She will be so very good for Orlando, even if he squirms under her thumb the entire time. More!
Delightful chapter. I'm feeling both sorry for and veryproud of Orlando. I think Monica might be just the person he needs to get things straight with himself and the eternal idiots =)
Delicious! I was so curious how the first meeting between Orlando and Monica would be and now I am really deligthed to read this chapter. Hope there will be more, please! Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for reading!!!
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Thanks for reading & we have plenty more still to come!!!
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Thanks for reading!!!!
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Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for reading!!!
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