Fic: Chloe/Oliver - Back to the Future 3/? NC-17 chapter

[cking1575]

Title: Chlollie-Ween Fic Challenge - Back to the Future 3/?
Author: Cking1575
Fandom: Smallville AU
Pairings: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: NC-17 THERE BE SEX IN THIS CHAPTER!!! BEWARE!! BEWARE!!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Smallville/DC or the characters. I am just playing with them.
Summary: A fan fic challenge from

Comments

[elidear]

Great chapter. I loved how Oliver told Chloe he loved her and they made love, possibly making Connor in the process! I loved the guys they are so funny! I liked how you had them teasing Chloe and Oliver. When Chloe threw she shoe at AC I almost spit out some water that I had been drinking while reading this. I loved that part! So funny!!!
I hope you don't end yet, because I want to see Lois' expression when she finds out her and Clark will marry and that their son from the future is here. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please write/post more soon!

[cking1575]

LOL OH YAY!!!! Someone finally meantioned the throwing of the shoe!!! :D

Heehee that was one of my favorite parts of this chapter and I was sooo hoping that someone would comment on it!! LOL I am soo glad that you liked this Chapter. :D

As for Lois...yup it's coming up in the next Chapter. I already have the scene partically written. :D

I should have more of this fic up in a few days. Thank you sooooo very much for reading this fic and leaving comments. I really truly appreciate it!!!
:D

[cking1575]

OOOhhhh thank you soo much!!! I am glad to hear that you enjoyed this chapter. I love all the JLA boys!!! :D

"Who’d ever think that you’d be so loud?” comment from AC is one of my favorite lines.

That line was just sooo AC in my mind. LOL :D

"And how you got the idea with the shoe? I couldn't stop laughing. Too funny."

LOL good, happy to hear that it made you laugh. Actually, the whole shoe thing was actually a scene out of my real life a few years ago...my younger brother got me so angry one time that I literally threw my shoe at him and hit him on the head with it! It was something really funny then, my whole family started cracking up laughing when I did that to him. So, as I was writing this scene that memory popped up and I thought that it would go perfectly here. :D

Thank you sooo much for leaving me a comment!!! I am working on the next chapter now but it'll still be a few days until it's finished. Hopefully, I can have it posted by this weekend. :D

[iluvaqt]

:DDD I'm so glad you didn't skip the smut, it was beautiful, sensual, deliciously hot and romantic. And then they figured out they could have conceived Connor and it hadn't even entered their minds, Oliver spilled his heart and prior fears and asked her to marry him and she says yes! WOW, stunning, super fast but yes, it just makes sense. :D

[cking1575]

:D Glad you liked this chapter too. I was really worried that I had over done the sex scene. I was really nervous about posting the smut with this fic. I had wanted to keep this fic short and simple but it morphed into a Hulk of a fic. But none the less, I am glad to hear that you enjoyed this and also that I didn't go over board.

Thanks a million for the comments.

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