Comments | cking1575: Fic: Chloe/Oliver - Back to the Future 3/? NC-17 chapter

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Fic: Chloe/Oliver - Back to the Future 3/? NC-17 chapter

Nov 13, 2009 21:59

Title: Chlollie-Ween Fic Challenge - Back to the Future 3/?
Author: Cking1575
Fandom: Smallville AU
Pairings: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: NC-17 THERE BE SEX IN THIS CHAPTER!!! BEWARE!! BEWARE!!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Smallville/DC or the characters. I am just playing with them.
Summary: A fan fic challenge from ( Read more... )

chloe/oliver pairing, back to the future, smallville

Comments 27

soapfan101 November 14 2009, 13:48:35 UTC

Oh My Goodness!....lol..dies...JL are so funny....aw Bart...lol

cking1575 November 14 2009, 16:39:15 UTC

Heehee Glad that you liked it! :D

I love writing about these characters! I just think that they are sooo under used on the show...they should totally make a JL spin off! :D

As for Bart...I KNOW didn't you just want to give him a hug!?! :D

Thanks sooo much for leaving a comment!! I am glad that you liked this chapter! :D

aongealach November 14 2009, 17:34:44 UTC

DAYMN! That was without a doubt the most erotic and titilating sex scene ever!! More on the weeding soon please.

cking1575 November 14 2009, 18:17:59 UTC

LOL Thanks! Glad to hear that you liked it!! :D

Thanks for leaving me a comment! :D

I am working on the next chapter and should be posted really soon. :D

chlavis333 November 15 2009, 00:07:28 UTC

WOWZA! That was amazing. You really had some excellent language and some beuatiful lines about how much they loved each other. I loved victor being cool and putting them usic on and Bart and AC's reactions were quite comical. Supurb job.

cking1575 November 15 2009, 01:46:15 UTC

Awwweee thank you! I am really happy to read that you enjoyed this chapter! :D

Thank you soo much for taking the time to read and leave a comment!!! I can not tell you how much I appreciate it!!! :D

Thank you too for the friend request!!! I am soo flattered that you sent it! :D

lilmoochie November 15 2009, 02:41:23 UTC

OMG! I would also like to thank those who convinced you to put the FUN in this fic. Wowsers chica that was so incredibly hawt! I LOVED, LOVED LOVED!!!!! IT!!!
Freaking brilliant! I cannot wait to read what happens next!!!

cking1575 November 15 2009, 20:30:42 UTC

Aww, you rock, Sista!!! AND you stole my line again!!! LOL :D

I am thrilled to hear that you liked this chapter LOL :D And yeah, I had some extra help with Chapter heehee...well, they convinced me to put the love scene in. :D

As for what happens next...I'm actually working on that today...heehee I have the end of this fic already written out! Now, I just have to write the in between section. :D

Talk to you soon, Chica, and thanks soo much for reading and leaving me a comment!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D

TTYS,
:D

isabella36 November 15 2009, 07:17:49 UTC

This is such a lovely story. Connor and Jonathan are SO cute. Although I have to admit Connor is my favorite. After all he is Chlollie's son. Which is why I'm requesting more of him. He makes me smile every time. I just can't get over how cute they are yelling "mommy" "daddy" "aunty" "uncle". ADORABLE ( ... )

cking1575 November 15 2009, 21:23:53 UTC

THANK YOU soooo much for this comment. You have totally made my day. The smile that I have on my face is soooo large that it's beginning to hurt my cheeks. LOL YOU ROCK!!!! This comment it AWESOME!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ( ... )

isabella36 November 18 2009, 03:12:29 UTC

"YOU ROCK!!!!"
Even though I hear it all the time. It never gets old. *Quick somebody throw a rock at her. Or a shoe.* LOL
Nah, seriously YOU"RE THE ONE THAT ROCKS! This story is just so fluffy and cute. It makes me smile every time I think about it. And you're more than welcomed for the comment. I try to comment whenever I read something because I know writers appreciate the fact. It takes a lot of effort to write something and it's always nice when people like your work. But try not to hurt yourself. I can't have you get hurt. I need more of this story.

"Yeah, Connor is my favorite too. :D (Shhhh, don't tell Jonny though. Heehee)"
Oh, Connor :D Don't worry your secret is safe with me.

"I am all about the fluffy, humorous, and sexy fics over angsty any day"
I read to dream. Both awake and asleep. Sometimes when I read about something too much I dream it. I have dreamt of Chlollie on several occasions. I simply don't like to read too much angst because then I'll have sad dreams. :(

"I wanted to make it as romantic and as hot/ ( ... )

cking1575 November 19 2009, 00:24:13 UTC

LOL, I just have to tell you that I love your comments and yes, you have free reign! Have at it!!! :D

I should have the next Chapter ready to post by this weekend! Cross your fingers and maybe your toes LOL, I'm a bit stuck right now on a scene but hopefully, it will come to me. I just need to take a break from this fic for a bit(I'm talking an hour or two) and then go back to it. I have the next chapter about 80% written.

Well, Thanks again sooo much for your awesome comments. I'm going to go read some Chlollie fics to help get my brain unclogged. Heehee :D