Fic - The Butterfly Effect 9/9

Jun 27, 2010 15:47



Title: The Butterfly Effect (9/9)

Rating: Hard R: violence, sex, harsh language, you probably know the drill by now.

The Butterfly Effect (9/9) )

fic, sarah connor chronicles

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fig_aruna June 28 2010, 01:12:28 UTC
You know where I stand on the "Should CJ write more?" question. :p

Unwilling to push her good fortune, she hadn’t told them about the list of names she had lost. The chances that anyone had found it were so slim that she really didn’t think it was an issue.

And this is why threatening your employees makes for a bad management strategy. :P

“This is fucking stupid,” she said quietly when they had finished. “I have a double bed.” He hesitated halfway through licking cream cheese from his thumb and just stared at her. She sighed and nodded towards the house. “C’mon.”

“I’m good out here.” They had never slept together. For reasons neither of them had ever discussed or probably even understood.

She nodded. “I know you are.” She tasted of poppy seed when she kissed him and he concluded in an instant that it would be better not to argue with her.

Mmmmmmm. ;)

“I dunno, mom, maybe they just spelled your name wrong.”Sorta OT, but I hate, hate, HATE IT when Connor is misspelled... *SETS OFF EXPLOSIONS ( ... )

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cj2017 June 29 2010, 07:27:47 UTC
You know where I stand on the "Should CJ write more?" question. :p

*innocent face* Nope. Not a clue ;-)

Sorta OT, but I hate, hate, HATE IT when Connor is misspelled... *SETS OFF EXPLOSIONS.*

LOL and it's always misspelt with an E. "John Conner goes to the future to search for his lost..." Right...Next!

So Savannah's the #1 Kaliba's most wanted list, eh? I assume(!?) John's not going to pull a BtR bubbling in your universe, so I'm really keen to find out why neither of the Connors seemed to have ever been on Kaliba's radar until Sarah effed their shit up at Desert Heat and Air...

Oh dear, I knew this one was going to come back and bite me in the arse! I kinda wrote it as Kaliba just saving a little bit of ink really. John and Sarah are public enemy No.1 & 2 to them (arrange them in whichever order you like!) but I decided that that would go without saying. Really, I wanted Savannah to be at the top so I missed them out completely. I'll try and elaborate a little next time around!

\o/!Hee! Spot the writer who was tired of ( ... )

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fig_aruna June 30 2010, 00:14:08 UTC
*innocent face* Nope. Not a clue ;-)

*twitches at you*

LOL and it's always misspelt with an E. "John Conner goes to the future to search for his lost..." Right...Next!

*twitches more and searches for extra-strength Tylenol*

Oh dear, I knew this one was going to come back and bite me in the arse! I kinda wrote it as Kaliba just saving a little bit of ink really. John and Sarah are public enemy No.1 & 2 to them (arrange them in whichever order you like!) but I decided that that would go without saying. Really, I wanted Savannah to be at the top so I missed them out completely. I'll try and elaborate a little next time around!

Oh, ha! That makes sense. Clarification duly noted. :D

Still thinking about that one. It's a tricky one given my general antipathy or animosity towards two of those characters...

I'm guessing you mean Ellison and...JH :)? Well, Adam Raised A Cain and BtR doesn't happen here, so you get to disregard the parts where you found him ultra-asshole-y...??? Lol.

The bed thing made me laugh, he's there, he's ( ... )

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cj2017 June 30 2010, 20:56:54 UTC
You wanna get something for all that twitching girlie, it can't be healthy ;-)

Oh, ha! That makes sense. Clarification duly noted. :D

I will try and clear it up next time out! I always envisaged the list as being a kind of Lieutenant and essential to the Resistance personnel list *makes note for later!*

I'm guessing you mean Ellison and...JH :)? Well, Adam Raised A Cain and BtR doesn't happen here, so you get to disregard the parts where you found him ultra-asshole-y...??? Lol.

Ellison and Weaver really. I definitely want to play with John Henry (so does Cain!) and I'd love to write Ellison in but Weaver, I have no clue about her motives and might struggle to make her fit in!

Aww! I want to have them camp out again!

You mean you want me to beat the crap out of them and throw them down another embankment? *sighs* Ahh, good times ;-) Wilderness seems to suit these two so never say never.

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phantomwriter05 June 28 2010, 03:45:32 UTC
Very fine ending ma'am ...

I'm not sure how to think about JH going to the dark side, but should be interesting.

The Sarah/Derek is evolving nicly into something sustanible that fits and is more believible than charlie/Sarah ...

seriously I can't think of anyone who actually bought into Charlie/Sarah. It was sort of like kate and John in salvation ... you just can't force it on people because there is no conection.

well anyway love how this is going.

PS. Your last story of your last chapter should be a Sarah/Derek wedding!

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cj2017 June 29 2010, 07:49:51 UTC
Very fine ending ma'am ...

Why, thank you sir :-)

I did like Sarah and Charley and I thought they had some lovely chemistry seeing as their only real together as a couple scene was their first (and last!) Great pair of actors which always helps.

well anyway love how this is going.

Thank you and thanks for taking the time to let me know :-)

PS. Your last story of your last chapter should be a Sarah/Derek wedding!

Dude. *shakes head in despair* Just. No. *g* Although I would truly love to see Sarah Connor's version of a shotgun wedding. I'm sure that would be spectacular.

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phantomwriter05 June 29 2010, 08:03:19 UTC
"Dude. *shakes head in despair* Just. No. *g* Although I would truly love to see Sarah Connor's version of a shotgun wedding. I'm sure that would be spectacular."

Oh come on!

it's not like I'm talking like Sarah going to a bridal shop with Cameron and John being the maid of honor. (LOL classic)

I'm talking the shotgun wedding, the getting drunk and saying fuck it.

waking up naked in a fancy hotel suite with matching rings and a picture of them possing with elvis with Sarah in a cheap veil and Derek with a clip on tie.

that's what needs to happen!!

you gotta make it happen!!

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cj2017 June 29 2010, 08:26:31 UTC
L
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Hell, I don't need to write it, you already did! ;-)

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roxybisquaint June 29 2010, 07:19:51 UTC
You know I loved this fic so fucking much, so I have only this to add...

More please :)

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cj2017 June 29 2010, 07:52:35 UTC
Awww, icon love :-)

As for more, I'm working on it... I has a plan and everything. Course, these damn things never stick to the plan, but *shrugs* at least I'm trying to be organised ;-)

Thanks for fucking loving it though! Or should that be "bleeping" loving it? ;-)

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4tcleric_lynx June 29 2010, 21:16:57 UTC
I just have finished to read the story (bad thing - I`ve been so damn busy last two week that I actually lost day`s counts and etc, good thing - I`ve had all five part at once) and I can`t even express properly how much I like it! Ok, just a few words then:

- Derek`s "spooning" speech before the blast - unelivebly lovely;
- T-888 crawling to Sarah - what a creepy flashback to 1984;
- Cameron words about "untrade" Jeep`s condition - OMG, I`ve laughed so hard!

Thank you for wonderful story, and I have so much hope that that would be more :)

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cj2017 June 30 2010, 21:00:44 UTC
I can`t even express properly how much I like it! Ok, just a few words then:

Bless you, and thank you for sticking around! It's a long fic, but seeing as it was all finished, I just thought I'd put it up relatively quickly.

- Derek`s "spooning" speech before the blast - unelivebly lovely;

Awww, that was one of my favourite bits. I didn't even plan it, but I did love it when I'd written it.

Thank you for wonderful story, and I have so much hope that that would be more :)

You are most welcome. Thank you for reviewing here and over on ff.net! I hope there'll be more. I am working on it :-)

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Checking back in... tackdriver56 July 12 2010, 01:44:01 UTC
Hi you! Thanks for 5,6 and "7 of 9" on the Palm TX for the long car ride to Florida. I was out in the real world for about 35 miles of hills and heat this afternoon, and the head is still a little fogged: exercise hangover?

Just wanted to say that I'm enjoying reading this, enjoying the ongoing negotiations between Sarah and Derek, which feels so right. I *do* like how *your* Sarah keeps her sex drive through thick and thin, no matter how beat up she gets. Thanks.

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Re: Checking back in... cj2017 July 13 2010, 13:23:53 UTC
Hey, good to know you're still around!

Just wanted to say that I'm enjoying reading this, enjoying the ongoing negotiations between Sarah and Derek, which feels so right.

I think they've got to a pretty good stage of their relationship where they balance each other out and then do what Sarah says ;-) I loved the boxing scene in this one. I think that was definitely one of my favourites.

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