Fic - The Butterfly Effect 9/9

Jun 27, 2010 15:47



Title: The Butterfly Effect (9/9)

Rating: Hard R: violence, sex, harsh language, you probably know the drill by now.

The Butterfly Effect (9/9) )

fic, sarah connor chronicles

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fig_aruna June 28 2010, 01:12:28 UTC
You know where I stand on the "Should CJ write more?" question. :p

Unwilling to push her good fortune, she hadn’t told them about the list of names she had lost. The chances that anyone had found it were so slim that she really didn’t think it was an issue.

And this is why threatening your employees makes for a bad management strategy. :P

“This is fucking stupid,” she said quietly when they had finished. “I have a double bed.” He hesitated halfway through licking cream cheese from his thumb and just stared at her. She sighed and nodded towards the house. “C’mon.”

“I’m good out here.” They had never slept together. For reasons neither of them had ever discussed or probably even understood.

She nodded. “I know you are.” She tasted of poppy seed when she kissed him and he concluded in an instant that it would be better not to argue with her.

Mmmmmmm. ;)

“I dunno, mom, maybe they just spelled your name wrong.”

Sorta OT, but I hate, hate, HATE IT when Connor is misspelled... *SETS OFF EXPLOSIONS.*

So Savannah's the #1 Kaliba's most wanted list, eh? I assume(!?) John's not going to pull a BtR bubbling in your universe, so I'm really keen to find out why neither of the Connors seemed to have ever been on Kaliba's radar until Sarah effed their shit up at Desert Heat and Air...

“So, Manchester, huh?” John was flicking through Zach’s printouts again. “I checked online, it’s rained for the past week. Actually, it seems to rain pretty much all week every week.”

\o/!

“Well, it’s not on fire.” He sounded genuinely impressed, which prompted a smattering of applause from the table.

L.O.L. Wise-asses!

I thought these people were my friends: Mr Ellison, Mr Murch, Ms Weaver. But I only have one friend and you, my brother.

Kristina narrowed her eyes, confused as to why Cain had gone to the trouble of deceiving Dyson. She clicked on the second message and let her breath out slowly.

Cain had annotated the photograph: ‘Savannah Weaver, my brother’s one friend’, but even without the child’s name Kristina would have recognized her face.

Oh, John Henry. John Henry, John Henry, John Henry...

As flaily as this new development is making me, I'm really excited to find out what places the Weavers, JH, and Ellison are going to have in the story!

Sarah glanced at the clock on the kitchen wall and then back at the cellphone that had just buzzed with an incoming message: boarded, all well. She closed the message down, left the phone on the table, and carried on into the hall. When she reached the first bedroom, she balanced the plate on top of the glass of milk and knocked on the door.

“Come in, mom.” Even with his voice muffled by the barrier, she could tell that John was smiling.

SarahJohn warm and fuzzies FTW! <3<3<33333

“So, you got a spare drawer, then?”

“Yeah, if I empty the C4 out of it.”

SarahDerek warm and fuzzies FTFW! <3<3<33333!!! I love it that Sarah's probably not even joking. LMAO!

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cj2017 June 29 2010, 07:27:47 UTC
You know where I stand on the "Should CJ write more?" question. :p

*innocent face* Nope. Not a clue ;-)

Sorta OT, but I hate, hate, HATE IT when Connor is misspelled... *SETS OFF EXPLOSIONS.*

LOL and it's always misspelt with an E. "John Conner goes to the future to search for his lost..." Right...Next!

So Savannah's the #1 Kaliba's most wanted list, eh? I assume(!?) John's not going to pull a BtR bubbling in your universe, so I'm really keen to find out why neither of the Connors seemed to have ever been on Kaliba's radar until Sarah effed their shit up at Desert Heat and Air...

Oh dear, I knew this one was going to come back and bite me in the arse! I kinda wrote it as Kaliba just saving a little bit of ink really. John and Sarah are public enemy No.1 & 2 to them (arrange them in whichever order you like!) but I decided that that would go without saying. Really, I wanted Savannah to be at the top so I missed them out completely. I'll try and elaborate a little next time around!

\o/!

Hee! Spot the writer who was tired of googling new and exciting locations! It was so lovely to be able to write about somewhere I actually knew.

L.O.L. Wise-asses!

Boys have only been there two weeks and already they know the way Sarah's cooking rolls.

As flaily as this new development is making me, I'm really excited to find out what places the Weavers, JH, and Ellison are going to have in the story!

Still thinking about that one. It's a tricky one given my general antipathy or animosity towards two of those characters...

SarahJohn warm and fuzzies FTW! <3<3<33333

Always. People matter. People... and cookies ;-)

I love it that Sarah's probably not even joking. LMAO!

I didn't think, for a second, that she was *g* The bed thing made me laugh, he's there, he's not there, he's in the yard. I don't know why but it just seemed so beautifully fucked up and right for them. Nothing's ever easy, not even their sleeping arrangements!

Anyways, thanks for sticking around and a million thanks for the feedback. Been a pleasure.

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fig_aruna June 30 2010, 00:14:08 UTC
*innocent face* Nope. Not a clue ;-)

*twitches at you*

LOL and it's always misspelt with an E. "John Conner goes to the future to search for his lost..." Right...Next!

*twitches more and searches for extra-strength Tylenol*

Oh dear, I knew this one was going to come back and bite me in the arse! I kinda wrote it as Kaliba just saving a little bit of ink really. John and Sarah are public enemy No.1 & 2 to them (arrange them in whichever order you like!) but I decided that that would go without saying. Really, I wanted Savannah to be at the top so I missed them out completely. I'll try and elaborate a little next time around!

Oh, ha! That makes sense. Clarification duly noted. :D

Still thinking about that one. It's a tricky one given my general antipathy or animosity towards two of those characters...

I'm guessing you mean Ellison and...JH :)? Well, Adam Raised A Cain and BtR doesn't happen here, so you get to disregard the parts where you found him ultra-asshole-y...??? Lol.

The bed thing made me laugh, he's there, he's not there, he's in the yard. I don't know why but it just seemed so beautifully fucked up and right for them. Nothing's ever easy, not even their sleeping arrangements!

Aww! I want to have them camp out again! I'm evil open-minded, so I'd take it a la Never A Good Day as well as Breaking Point. ;D

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cj2017 June 30 2010, 20:56:54 UTC
You wanna get something for all that twitching girlie, it can't be healthy ;-)

Oh, ha! That makes sense. Clarification duly noted. :D

I will try and clear it up next time out! I always envisaged the list as being a kind of Lieutenant and essential to the Resistance personnel list *makes note for later!*

I'm guessing you mean Ellison and...JH :)? Well, Adam Raised A Cain and BtR doesn't happen here, so you get to disregard the parts where you found him ultra-asshole-y...??? Lol.

Ellison and Weaver really. I definitely want to play with John Henry (so does Cain!) and I'd love to write Ellison in but Weaver, I have no clue about her motives and might struggle to make her fit in!

Aww! I want to have them camp out again!

You mean you want me to beat the crap out of them and throw them down another embankment? *sighs* Ahh, good times ;-) Wilderness seems to suit these two so never say never.

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