At Fig-Aruna's urging I've spent the last week catching up with your series. There very good and you make me look like a saint with all I've put Sarah through in my stories. LOL!
I have a feeling that you and me are heading in the same direction in our stories with a cult of people who turn terrorist being inspired by Sarah.
but if that isn't the case than ... you didn't hear anything. LOL!
anyway I'm really digging your stories and the way you're writing Sarah/Derek.
At Fig-Aruna's urging I've spent the last week catching up with your series.
LOL. That girl can be very persuasive. And yeah, I've been a bit mean to Sarah (especially if you read the fics in one go!) But then, this is Sarah Connor. She's hard as nuclear nails ;-)
As for where the gals and guys are going, I couldn't possibly say. This one takes a few turns...
anyway I'm really digging your stories and the way you're writing Sarah/Derek.
That makes me very happy. S/D are a pleasure to write but it's always nice to know people are enjoying reading them.
You're a masochist. IS CAT AWARE OF THIS????? D':fig_arunaJune 19 2010, 00:41:40 UTC
Couple things I wanted to comment specifically here on this chapter:
- Even though Michael and Zach have only been in this fic for two chapters now, I felt a deeply painful sense of loss when the shit hit the fan for them... Michael desperately trying to give John the coordinates over the phone made me all crumply-eyed and twingey-handed...
- Sarah's phone call to John in the midst of high-speed firefight on a darkened road was really surreal. And heartbeat increasing. I swear like a sailor, but the number of times the f-bomb was dropped during that confrontation was pretty fantastic!
- "People matter, John. They're all that matters." John and Sarah in-characterness FTW.
- Have I mentioned that I really dislike Kristina? I just want Cameron to do a sneak attack her in her office and then comment on how gaudy her nails are.
Re: You're a masochist. IS CAT AWARE OF THIS????? D':cj2017June 19 2010, 08:26:57 UTC
Masochist or sadist?! Cos I'm pretty sure I've already read the rest of this fic, which - if you're not loving the cliff-hangers - kinda makes me a sadist *laughs*.
Even though Michael and Zach have only been in this fic for two chapters now, I felt a deeply painful sense of loss when the shit hit the fan for them... Michael desperately trying to give John the coordinates over the phone made me all crumply-eyed and twingey-handed...
*takes a deep breath* Thank you :-) OCs are always, always scary to write so I'm happy these two seem to be working out for people. I have a real soft-spot for ma boys *g*
- Sarah's phone call to John in the midst of high-speed firefight on a darkened road was really surreal. And heartbeat increasing. I swear like a sailor, but the number of times the f-bomb was dropped during that confrontation was pretty fantastic!
LOL. Sorry for making you foul-mouthed! I loved that scene in Alpine Fields where John phones in the middle of the stand-off ("just put the alarm on") so this was a little throw-back to
( ... )
And it's nice to have a bit of the Sarah Legend for a change. :)
Ahh, yes :-) It is the Sarah Connor Chronicles after all. And she is a legend. Totally and utterly. Writing Sarah puts a huge grin on my face she is so awesome.
I know, I already said that not just once, and yet I wanna to do that again - I adore you style of writing!
And there was absolutely brilliant, nice and funny moment when Cameron tried to figure out why Derek and Sarah acting unlikely "normal" couple. OMG, I so would so wanna to see it! :lol:
LOL. I only just figured out that it was you on ff.net! I'm such an idiot, but many thanks for the reviews here, there, everywhere *g*
And there was absolutely brilliant, nice and funny moment when Cameron tried to figure out why Derek and Sarah acting unlikely "normal" couple. OMG, I so would so wanna to see it! :lol:
Poor Cam. She tries so hard and instantly fails just as hard. It's fun to use her as an innocent and completely unguarded commentator sometimes. She gets away with asking the questions no one else would ever voice.
Great car chase / gun fight, and Michael / Zach / Kaliba encounter. Looking forward to the Kristina & Dyson show. I'm a little lost on their thread tonight.
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At Fig-Aruna's urging I've spent the last week catching up with your series. There very good and you make me look like a saint with all I've put Sarah through in my stories. LOL!
I have a feeling that you and me are heading in the same direction in our stories with a cult of people who turn terrorist being inspired by Sarah.
but if that isn't the case than ... you didn't hear anything. LOL!
anyway I'm really digging your stories and the way you're writing Sarah/Derek.
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At Fig-Aruna's urging I've spent the last week catching up with your series.
LOL. That girl can be very persuasive. And yeah, I've been a bit mean to Sarah (especially if you read the fics in one go!) But then, this is Sarah Connor. She's hard as nuclear nails ;-)
As for where the gals and guys are going, I couldn't possibly say. This one takes a few turns...
anyway I'm really digging your stories and the way you're writing Sarah/Derek.
That makes me very happy. S/D are a pleasure to write but it's always nice to know people are enjoying reading them.
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OH. MY. FLECKING. GOD!!
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Might need it for later parts as well... ;-)
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Couple things I wanted to comment specifically here on this chapter:
- Even though Michael and Zach have only been in this fic for two chapters now, I felt a deeply painful sense of loss when the shit hit the fan for them... Michael desperately trying to give John the coordinates over the phone made me all crumply-eyed and twingey-handed...
- Sarah's phone call to John in the midst of high-speed firefight on a darkened road was really surreal. And heartbeat increasing. I swear like a sailor, but the number of times the f-bomb was dropped during that confrontation was pretty fantastic!
- "People matter, John. They're all that matters." John and Sarah in-characterness FTW.
- Have I mentioned that I really dislike Kristina? I just want Cameron to do a sneak attack her in her office and then comment on how gaudy her nails are.
- "We believe you." <-- CHILLS, MISSY. CHILLLLLLLS.
Update soon, pwease?!???
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Even though Michael and Zach have only been in this fic for two chapters now, I felt a deeply painful sense of loss when the shit hit the fan for them... Michael desperately trying to give John the coordinates over the phone made me all crumply-eyed and twingey-handed...
*takes a deep breath* Thank you :-) OCs are always, always scary to write so I'm happy these two seem to be working out for people. I have a real soft-spot for ma boys *g*
- Sarah's phone call to John in the midst of high-speed firefight on a darkened road was really surreal. And heartbeat increasing. I swear like a sailor, but the number of times the f-bomb was dropped during that confrontation was pretty fantastic!
LOL. Sorry for making you foul-mouthed! I loved that scene in Alpine Fields where John phones in the middle of the stand-off ("just put the alarm on") so this was a little throw-back to ( ... )
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And it's nice to have a bit of the Sarah Legend for a change. :)
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And it's nice to have a bit of the Sarah Legend for a change. :)
Ahh, yes :-) It is the Sarah Connor Chronicles after all. And she is a legend. Totally and utterly. Writing Sarah puts a huge grin on my face she is so awesome.
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I know, I already said that not just once, and yet I wanna to do that again - I adore you style of writing!
And there was absolutely brilliant, nice and funny moment when Cameron tried to figure out why Derek and Sarah acting unlikely "normal" couple. OMG, I so would so wanna to see it! :lol:
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And there was absolutely brilliant, nice and funny moment when Cameron tried to figure out why Derek and Sarah acting unlikely "normal" couple. OMG, I so would so wanna to see it! :lol:
Poor Cam. She tries so hard and instantly fails just as hard. It's fun to use her as an innocent and completely unguarded commentator sometimes. She gets away with asking the questions no one else would ever voice.
Very happy you're having fun with this one.
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As always, Sarah is awesom.
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As always, Sarah is awesome.
Sarah rocks my tiny little world :-)
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And "Samson and Delilah", via Bolton, still rocks mine. :-)
T.
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O.
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I still can't believe I actually did that. It's the last time I'm taking the missus out for a meal and then letting her talk me into things! ;-)
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