Comments | circle_tower: Fic: The Knight-Commander's Favor, NSFW!!

cjk1701 in circle_tower

Fic: The Knight-Commander's Favor, NSFW!!

Dec 22, 2009 01:26

The #swoopingisbad crowd has read this one before, but I hadn't posted it to LJ.

Title: The Knight-Commander's Favor
Author: cjk1701
Disclaimer: Everything you recognise belongs to BioWare.
Pairing: Greagoir/mage
Rating: NC-17, NSFW
Warnings: Heavy non-con! Please don't read if this might hit your triggers ( Read more... )

nsfw, fanfiction, greagoir

Comments 7

cat_on_coals December 22 2009, 03:52:14 UTC

I fucking love this story. *Flails around.* I've always enjoyed it, because I can just imagine my PC being in that position--the wicked little thing.

And, as always, I adore that you used my lyrium idea.

cjk1701 December 22 2009, 04:14:24 UTC

It made perfect sense. When you said that about the lyrium, my brain just went, Bing! this is how it should be.

I shudder to imagine Greagoir in the aftermath of this if it *was* your PC. He'd end up missing various bits of his body, and that would be the least of his troubles. ;)

cat_on_coals December 22 2009, 04:19:45 UTC

She wouldn't put specific bodyparts of his in a jar... naaaaaw..

Also, I want your icon. FFF.

cjk1701 December 22 2009, 04:53:09 UTC

Feel free to grab it. All my home-made icons are free for others to use.

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cjk1701 December 22 2009, 04:53:56 UTC

Thank you. :)

sea_of_storms December 22 2009, 05:04:05 UTC

It's very dark, of course, but Greagoir's character leaves so much open to interpretation. I think you've done a wonderful job of pegging precisely how dark the imbalance of power could become, if taken to the logical end (and truly, it could probably get even darker, but that would be painful to read).

cjk1701 December 22 2009, 05:09:56 UTC

Thank you, that's exactly what I was trying to show. I don't really believe canon Greagoir would do such a thing, but, as you said, the situation at the Tower offers the possibility of such abuse.