Drabbles: Weekly Drabble Challenge: Viciously and Decomposition

[cindyanne1]

This is an excerpt from a short story I wrote a while ago, called Alien Plan.

Word Count: 197
Pictures: 2
Involves: Pascal Curious
Warning: non-sexual nudity

Pascal Curious took a deep, sudden breath, and opened his eyes.

Why was it so dark and cold? Why did it hurt so much to breathe?

Suddenly, he remembered, and in a panic, he felt his abdomen, not

Comments

[javabean_dreams]

woo! naked pascal! poor pascal. dying alone. :(
also, i now know the term "birth queen" really skeeves me out. LOL.

[cindyanne1]

Yes, ME TOO!

[madame_ugly]

Dirty tease.

Not only do you show "nudity" of the Curious variety, but you dangle an interesting Curious/Alien story just out of reach of my niping little teeth.

*whines and scratches at you like an ill mannered dog*

[cindyanne1]

Hee hee... mainly I've never posted it because I've never finished it. What's funny is it's not the ending that's unfinished... it's the beginning. And that's just wrong somehow, but there it is, lol.

It started off being a game I was playing just for fun with the story just in my head, but then the story became more developed and I started writing it down. I've tried several approaches to the beginning, but so far nothing has clicked.

I'm still working on it though! :P

[akanwa]

I hope you can get it hashed out someday. It sounds really interesting.

[cindyanne1]

Thank you! I hope so too. :)

[redqueenofevil]

:( Dying alone sounds so sad.

[cindyanne1]

Very sad. :( And Pascal wasn't the only Curious to die in this. ;) (What is wrong with me that I kill off the sims in stories so much, lol? I think I'm just a sucker for the drama!)

But was Pascal really dead? Hmmm...

[redqueenofevil]

Hey. Decided to delete that entry you responded to, because I sort of had some things wrong. However, I'll look into the comedian you mentioned. Just wanted to let you know. I still wonder if people are (instead of planning ahead) being reactionary about cars, hence my skepticism for that car in question.

[cindyanne1]

Oh, no worries! But yes, if you ever get a chance, do check out Jeff Dunham. He's actually a ventrilloquist (sp?) too... and his act is probably the funniest thing EVER. :P

[dragancaor]

Oh wow. Tease! Glad to read you're still working on it. Looks like another of your brilliant ones!

[cindyanne1]

Thank you! I really do hope to get it finished. It's crazy that I'm having trouble coming up with a good beginning, isn't it? :P It's a really fun story. Involves aliens and robots, too! Whee!