Wherein Eggsy was too tired for a pre-emptive strike.

Sep 02, 2015 18:45

Honestly, if Eggsy wasn't so defensive, and so willing to lash out first in order to protect himself, the last chapter could've been so much happier. Like, I had a little draft I would've expanded on if the story had moved in that direction. It did not. But, here's the quick draft of a happy ending.

“Eggsy, we need to talk.” It was, honestly, ( Read more... )

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ext_3291364 September 4 2015, 00:20:56 UTC
Please have the story end with a HAPPY ending.
Maybe Roxy is sick of seeing all three of them mopping and kidnaps them and won't let them out until they have a honest talk then darts/shots/gases them with truth serum.

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cimila September 14 2015, 10:11:00 UTC
Oh yeah, once Roxy puts everything together, she's going to want to crack some heads together. Maybe she'll be the catalyst, or maybe she'll just have to pick up the pieces of Eggsy. :) But, a happy ending is looking likely atm, otherwise my friend will never read it.

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