Comments | cieluna: Fic: Birthday. (Patrick/Pete)

cieluna

Fic: Birthday. (Patrick/Pete)

Jan 02, 2009 12:17

And then he was out the door.

~fin

Concrit and comments are loved. :)

Comments 36

torturedbarbie January 3 2009, 03:52:13 UTC

Damn, that was a jerker.
Amazing though, for so few words.

I liked it a lot.

~All the power in the world to Patrick for being able to walk away!

cieluna January 7 2009, 10:50:29 UTC

Patrick should get a monument for being able to brush off the Wentz, haha!
Sorry for the short piece though~
But thank you so much for liking it :)
Oh and your icon reminded me of my new fic, it's a hell of a lot longer and involves a lot of FBR Boys but I sincerely &heart; Gerard there *giggles*

shinodarely January 3 2009, 04:40:09 UTC

my heart. it just broke. oh that was just wow intense and sad and so tragically beautiful. Manificent work.

cieluna January 7 2009, 10:20:34 UTC

Wow, thank you sooo much for the great comment! :D
If you liked that fic of mine, I do hope you take some time to check out my new one, I'd really appreciate your comments on that :) Thank you!!

shinodarely January 7 2009, 17:04:08 UTC

oh def i will!

myjadedhavok January 3 2009, 08:16:10 UTC

*bawls*

the fall of pete wentz.

too bad he crushed patrick on the way down.

*cuddles trick*

its okay baby. i still love you. and joe. and andy.... and, okay, pete, too, when he's not being a douche.

but mostly you.

and I REALLY love your writing, dear. :)

cieluna January 7 2009, 10:09:22 UTC

The fall of Pete Wentz. Ooh, I love that.

Thank you sooo much! :) I hope you check out my newest fic, it's one of my favorites :D

sexu_elle January 3 2009, 09:14:55 UTC

*lip trembling*

wh-wh-what?!?!
peter, you muffin! patrick is your friend! BROS BEFORE HOES, PETE!
...and theres something called 'protection'. you know, those rubber things you stick on yo- *ahem* nevemind, whats done is done.
and patrick, with his final line...knocked me dead. if i wasnt tearing from the onions i was chopping [at 4am, might wanna add], id be all over the place, tears running.

you. are. GOOD!
<3<3<3

cieluna January 7 2009, 10:11:46 UTC

bros before hoes.
exactly.
:DD

Thank you so much for that, dear :') I really love your comments!!
Oh please read my new fic?
I'd love to get your opinion on that toooo~ ;))

papercut_wounds January 3 2009, 10:08:43 UTC

awwie . i 'also' almost cried .. why does it have to be soooo sad ?
-sniff-

anyway, i knew it'll be great !!! too great xD
OMG, ILY <33 you're a genius !
i was just wasn't expecting this to be so so very deeply sad T^T

TEN THUMBS UP ! ( if i ever have ten thumbs :] )

p.s. will be added to the memories .

cieluna January 7 2009, 10:13:24 UTC

^^; sorry for the very depressing scene DDD:
It just hit me and, if it was a ten-wheeler truck, I wouldn't be able to ignore it even if I tried haha!
THANK YOU FOR TEN THUMBS XDD
Hope you check my new ficcy please~ ;)

papercut_wounds January 8 2009, 07:34:39 UTC

sure, no prob !

did you know i am already one of your fanssss .?

:D