First Son (6/7)

[cieluna]

A boy of about eighteen or nineteen pushed open his car door, letting loose the eardrum-thumping beats of aimless rap music that was common in the early 90’s. He had on a pair of large, round sunglasses that rounded out the huge width and length of the rest of his clothes, and frankly, Patrick envied him.

‘Wonder what it’s like out there’, he

Comments

[mojojessjo]

I loved this chapter! Especially Patrick slapping Jon because I did not see it coming.

The Twins getting their own reality show as well as CD was great. That would definitely be a show that I would tune into every week to see because the hijinxs would be hysterical.

Also, poor Patrick. Now he has to deal with a dinner in Washington! That would be worse than a fancy restaurant with the over abundance of silverware!

[cieluna]

The slap scene was one of the few from my original plotline that I really kept 'cause I really wanted to see some soap opera drama, haha! :))

Oh yes, I wish those brothers could get one in real life too~ :D They wouldn't be as bizarre as they are here but it'd def. be a blast, still :D

Haha, I shall leave no further comment and hope you read the last chapter ;D But yes, MUCH worse. :))

Thank youuu! *hugstight*

[xoneandonlyx]

YAY!!!!
i liked this chapter!!!!!
GO PETERICK!
yeah idk if i spelled that right, lmao.

woo for fluff and slapping!

[cieluna]

yes you did! :))
fluff + slapping = best combination.
just not on the same person LOL :))
Thank youuu!~
hope you like my last chapter :D

[xfireworkzstarx]

OH MA GAWDZ
OH MA GAWDZ
OH MA GAWDZ
OH MA GAWWWWWWWWWWWDZZ
FUCKING FLUFF *rapes fic*

and lololol at the slapping scene

WE ALL KNOW THEY'RE ALL REALLY GAY RALLYYY

:D
(they just don't know it yet xp)

just like how patrick doesnt know im his wife yet

YOU WIN...
...
LAWNMOWER!

[slash_scion]

OMG *hugs you tightly* I'm at books-a-million and am supposed to be being a nice friend and sharing my computer with my internet-less friend but now I have to stay here and read it while she wanders around the store. haha

*commences reading*

*is done reading*

*dies*

*brings myself back to life*

...Um...LOVED IT!

Okay, so the Battle of the Bands: I'm so freaking relieved that Patrick didn't vote for Panic at the Disco (even though he voted for MCR because he liked their song better[and even though I totally think MCR are a better band than PATD *hides head from the people who are throwing rotten fruit at me now*]). I totally enjoyed Gabe and Bill's banter (even though there is just now way they would have gotten away with letting the F-bomb drop in front of public officials and such [though I did laugh my butt off

[cieluna]

THANK YOUUU :')

i will not comment further about the two bands because i think i got myself into too much hot water already lol ^^; i just HAD to put those two together, haha DD:

Aww, kindly say thanks to your friend for me :) that really means a lot, seriously :D

Gasp. You read it in public? :DD
You so made my day XD
my week, even :D

I seriously adore your comments.
Seriously.
:)
*hugstight*

[cieluna]

OH SHIT SOLAR POWERED LAWNMOWER (i def. spelled it LAWNMORE at first LOLLL)

the sad part about that ten man band thing is it's based on a real experience. extremely sad, yes.

*gasps* my fics a dead person??
COOOOOL 8DDD

i might write a sequel, very possible :)) 'cause the way twins' reality show MUST. PUSH. THROUGH. :DD

Hope you like the last chapter and not murder me too gruesomely, i need to show my face during the funeral and shit y'know :))

*hugstight*

[kittygrenade]

I expected Patrick to slap Jon, but after he had asked if Jon need more publicity, I expected Patrick to kiss him and then slap him.

But YAY Patrick and Pete have kissed and made up!

As much as I hate to see this end, I cannot wait to read the next chapter! ♥

I love this fic so much. =^-^=

[clandestine_ema]

o dear ryden.

i can not believe you updated again!!

i was so fuckin stoked when i read the latest chapter yesterday and imagine my extensive joy when i came home to find... TAH DAH....THIS!!

Thank you thank you thank you.