First Son (6/7)

[cieluna]

A boy of about eighteen or nineteen pushed open his car door, letting loose the eardrum-thumping beats of aimless rap music that was common in the early 90’s. He had on a pair of large, round sunglasses that rounded out the huge width and length of the rest of his clothes, and frankly, Patrick envied him.

‘Wonder what it’s like out there’, he

Comments

[belle_lestrange]

omg omg omg love love love love! me and petecoon are very happy, yes yes we are :3 though wow, curious about that dinner haha

and you totally have to write a sequel all about the twins' show ;)

your writing is so amazing as well *major envy*

♥

[outrageous_mo]

he generally referred to himself in the third person when he was very pleased with himself.
HA! All the best people do that >.<

He slapped him! In my head, I danced a bit =]

Plus Rydon action = Happy mee.

They are back together!!! Also the reason for the costume is a CAH-YUTE as lil' Bronx Mowgli!

This made a great day excellent! Thankyou!

[jordanzgrl17]

See, I just knew J-Walk + Spence + Ryden forming a band would = Panic!

Aw, Pete and Patrick are so adorable when they're hugging and kissing in the bookstore. I hope when Trick slammed him into the cash register, it shouldn't have hurt too much. At least it wasn't a book display or something equally painful and fun to knock down.

Can't wait for the seventh and final chapter! Oh how I love fluff <3

[jordanzgrl17]

And that costume idea was great! But still, those other guesses were pretty darn close!

[cieluna]

ears are ringing? D: i hate that feeling. makes me want to repeatedly slap my ear.. meh. :))

hahaha I think we have the same set of freaks too? :)) i based that on an actual skit my friends did for an economics presentation. yes. Economics. O_O

Gabe and Bill come in a package haha, one can't be hired without the other 'tagging along', don't you think? XD

I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING TWO EFFING LONG COMMENTS DEAR.

Anyhoo.
I feel the pain with the short issue ;__;

and Jon so totally had it coming mahaha, poor patrick had no choice but to go bitchslap him :)))

I TEEHEE A LOT TOO!
But in general.
which is sad, according to some people.
but i like it. XDD

I LOVES YOUS FOREVERS AND EVERS TOOOOS XDD
*hugstight*

[tempestinatcup]

I just realized that I never really say anything about how much I love your writing--it's just one of those things that I can't really put into words, so consider it implied. =)

I LOVE your metaphors, and the kissing scene was perfection.

And there was a quote I really liked but now I can't remember what it was. *pouts* Poo.

[cieluna]

Awww! I hate you, you keep making me so darn happy when I should be cursing the load of homework I purposefully accidentally forget due to this fic :))

Thank you SOOO much :D I sometimes think my metaphors border on the inane though so thank you for the appreciation :) And yay to boy!kissing lol :))

*giggle*
I'm sorry.
I tend to giggle when people say 'Poo.'
Yes, I'm secretly four years old. :\
:))
*hugstight*

[tempestinatcup]

I have so much homework to do, and I haven't even been writing anything!

(Well, I have, but it hasn't been getting anywhere. I'm always criticizing it and restarting it to the point where I can't even stand the idea any more. I have a list of things I want to write, I've just been having trouble.)

I am a born procrastinator, though. But. I am off to do my homework, and attempt to write something!

(And just writing this all out made me feel a lot better. Thanks for listening, or at least letting me drain all this stuff out.)

[tempestinatcup]

Oh, and boy kissing is the best. =) I just watched a football game, too. SO MUCH LOVE!!