Stepford Porsche 2/2

[vericus]

Part 2

Title: Stepford Porsche
Rating: M
Setting: G1
Pairings/Characters: Prowl/Jazz, Ratchet, Sideswipe, Smokescreen
Summary: Sometimes, in new environments, very old, complex relationships can come up with some very weird, very strange responses. Especially when one of the mechs involved in the relationship is Jazz.
Notes: Look, fanart! *hearts

Comments

[kyra_neko_rei]

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love the chair. That was awesome and clever and haha, they got Prime with it! Too bad Megatron isn't a regular visitor.

[vericus]

heh. The chair was so random, and yet it turned out to be the one thing I couldn't do away with. I had to rewrite the ending like three times, cuz I wanted to fit the fate of the chair in, and I couldn't figure out how, lol.

And I'll have you know my Jazz muse is now giggling insanely in the back of my mind and trying to figure out how to get Megatron with the chair. :P (so far it's either a temporary truce, or Skywarp teams up with one of the Autobots)

[kyra_neko_rei]

Wellllll . . . one of those problems that pop up occasionally that require a truce, yeah . . .

Yes. This needs to be written.

[__wilderness__]

*howls* Oh my. This is a perfect accompiament (sp? *lazy*) to those pictures and the story oh my the story!

Smokescreen.. hee... I could feel his embarrassment and horror! What a wonderful exploration of their relationships and the lengths they'll go to!
And the chair! It was lurking there in the back of my mind, but the story drew me back in until I reached the end and scrolled down for the epilogue.

Here, has some internetz!

And the accent was spot on for my tastes! *still pondering that damn Redneck!Ironhide fic*

[vericus]

haha, oddly Dania gave me the bunny just before the pictures, but it's taken me this long to get it out, lol.

And Smokescreen - ah, Smokescreen. I had no idea he was even going to be in this until the first time I wrote his name. Completely unlucky random draw for him, lol. Actually if he wanted to, he could blame Veji, since thanks to her, whenever I think of one of the datsuns I automatically connect him to the other two now...I'm surprised Bluestreak didn't show up, lol.

You should totally write that fic. And have someone make a joke about how at least Hide's neck is the right color for his accent.

[synaltern]

I have to say that my favorite character was the Chair. Yeah. That was good - the whole thing, just especially the epilogue.

[vericus]

The Chair...I'm beginning to think it's sentient, lol. It refused to let me forget it, even though it was just a random detail I tossed in.

Glad you enjoyed it!

[eerian_sadow]

there is too much about this entire fic that is just pure win. i almost died laughing several times.

you win the internet. where can we deliver it?

[vericus]

Deliver the internet to jazz. Maybe then he'll leave me alone. :P Unlikely, but I can hope, lol. I'd rather not be responsible for people dying. Or almost dying. *pokes* Though, from laughter is a good way to go, I suppose. XD So happy you likied!

[eerian_sadow]

well, the fact that i was reading in the coffeehouse and was attempting not to disturb the other patrons did not help my near death experience. though laughing is a wonderful way to go. i highly recomend it.

i really did like it. may i save it to my fic archive so i can go back and reread at home?

[vericus]

haha, go ahead and save it. I've lost enough fics to the interweb I know it's a good thing to have your own copy sometime.

[lyta_earthstar]

That was excellent! Loved it!

Yes, Jazz needs a matching chair, definitely!

[vericus]

Glad you liked! Jazz is deffinitely getting a matching chair...they'll probably end up replacing the one in their quarters at some point, too. XD Sitting down near them will never be safe.